POLI 361

Issues in World Politics

Research Paper and Role-playing Simulation

 

This is big and has very important information in it.  For that reason, I’ve created a Table of Contents (linked to sections below) for you to use to find information you’re looking for.  You should read this entire assignment, however.  I guarantee you will wind up with a better grade if you do.

 

The Assignment

            The Class Challenge

Taiwan-China Simulation Roles

The Paper

The Role-Playing simulation

Requirements

Sources

Citations and Bibliography

Citing Specific Information

Page Numbers

Numbering Endnotes or Footnotes

Introductory Paragraph

Quotes

Plagiarism

Nitpicks and Style Issue (or Helpful hints)

Late Papers

The Assignment

Over three class periods we will simulate the international politics of the China and Taiwan question.  Each of you will be assigned the role of a governmental official of an interested nation (see the possible roles listed below). Your challenge will be to prepare your nation and work with other nations to reduce the probability of a serious diplomatic, economic, or military clash over the China-Taiwan issue. We will have full class period briefing on the issue, but the short version is this:

Japan occupied China during World War II.  When Japan was defeated, the internationally-recognized government of the Republic of China, led by the Nationalist Party (Kuomintang or Goumindang) under Chiang Kai-shek, faced a rebellion from the Communist Party of China led by Mao Zedong.  What quickly became a civil war by 1946 was a continuation of a struggle between the two groups that goes back to the 1920s.  The Communists won the war in October 1949, proclaiming the birth of the People’s Republic of China. The Nationalists fled to the island of Taiwan where they set up a Republic of China government in exile and pledged themselves to retaking the mainland.  The struggle became a classic Cold War rivalry. The US and its allies backed the Republic of China (ROC) government (on Taiwan), while the USSR and its allies supported the People’s Republic of China (PRC) (with possession of the mainland). Both governments pledged to reunify someday, but obviously each had a different notion of what that might look like. Both governments believed in “One China,” and both in the 1950s and early 1960s seemed to believe that reunification would require military force. China sought to regain control of a “renegade province” of “splittists.”  Taiwan hoped to use military incursions into the mainland to spur a rebellion against the Communist government that might lead to a return of the Nationalists to control of the nation.

It is an awkward situation: two governments; two economies; independent of each other and stating support for reunification, while being openly hostile toward each other. Other nations around the world choose which nation to consider the real China. For example, Japan recognized the ROC in Taiwan as the real China until 1972, then it switched to the PRC.  The US recognized the ROC until 1979 then switched to the PRC. Both Japan and the US have unofficial relations with Taiwan (trade and cultural ties, as well as military ties), but do not recognize Taiwan as a sovereign state. 

The situation is much the same today although a bit more complex.  Though China is still a dictatorship led by the Communist party, it is a “Communist” country with a capitalist economy, and has deep economic ties with all the major nations in East Asia (including Taiwan) and the rest of the world. It is the second largest economy in the world.  It has a goal of reunifying Taiwan and explicitly states that, if necessary, it will use force to take back Taiwan, which it still considers to be a renegade province.  Taiwan has transformed from an anti-communist dictatorship (1949-1987) into an economically-thriving liberal-democracy.  And that complicates things. First, the 25 million or so people in Taiwan have less and less interest in giving up liberal democracy to merge with an authoritarian state.  Second, the majority of the population has never lived in China or lived in Taiwan when it was part of China; over 80% now see themselves as Taiwanese and not ethnically Chinese (the last time Taiwan and China were unified under one government for any significant period of time was before the 1894-1895 Sino-Japanese War).   Third, one of the main parties in Taiwan, the Democratic Progressive Party (DPP) is led by people who often state their support for Taiwan independence. What “independence” means in this context is an official statement that Taiwan no longer seeks eventual reunification with China and would like to be recognized as a sovereign state, a situation in which there would be effectively “two Chinas” or “one China and one Taiwan.” China, however, states very clearly: if Taiwan declares “independence,” China will invade. 

China often uses military intimidation whenever Taiwanese politicians use rhetoric that leans toward independence.  Intimidation comes in the form of ballistic missile tests that fly over Taiwanese territory, fighter planes that cross the half-way point in the Taiwan Strait (the waterway that separates Taiwan and China). Generally, when Taiwan has a presidential or legislative election, China uses military exercise to intimidate voters, hoping to convince them to vote against the DPP, and instead vote for the Nationalist Party, the KMT, which is still a main party in Taiwan, and still believes in eventual reunification with China.

Now here’s the kicker. The US has a policy of “strategic ambiguity” toward the defense of Taiwan. The US usually does not say specifically that it will defend Taiwan if China uses force against it, but the US does sell Taiwan military equipment and has consistently said that any Chinese aggression toward Taiwan will have the “gravest consequences.”  While president, Trump even suggested that two China’s would be fine with him, but quickly backed down when Xi Jinping complained. On four occasions President Biden has explicitly stated that the US would defend Taiwan if China attacked it. Each time, White House officials suggested that Biden’s statements weren’t a change in US policy (even though they clearly were). Biden’s strategic clarity followed by a denial may be the Biden administration version of strategic ambiguity.  In short, A Chinese attack on Taiwan may be the beginning of World War III.

By the way, 179 nations recognize the PRC as China. Only 12 nations have official relations with Taiwan (meaning they recognize Taiwan as a sovereign state).

 

The Class Challenge

            Our challenge in this class is to fast forward a few months.  On January 13, 2024, Taiwan will have a presidential and legislative election.  Currently, Tsai Ing-wen of the DPP is president. She is ending her second four-year term as president and cannot run again. The current vice president, Lai Ching-te, is the DPP candidate for president, and is running ahead in the polls. The KMT candidate is the current New Taipei Mayor, Hou Yu-ih.  The Legislative Yuan of Taiwan has 113 seats; all up for re-election (four-year terms). DPP has 62 seats; the KMT has 37.

            That’s all true. Here’s the simulation part that is fiction, and sets up our game: Rumors are that if Lai Ching-te wins and the DPP maintains its majority in the legislature, the new government will declare independence.   China has warned that this means war. What do we do about that?

            Each one of you will be assigned a role in the simulation as an official from one of 14 different nations (no one represents China or Taiwan; they’re policies will be governed by Burdett and Newmann specifically so we can throw curveballs at you during the simulation. Each nation will be represented by three officials/roles: a minister of foreign affairs, minister of defense, and minister of finance (or their equivalents).  If you’re assigned a minister of foreign affairs role, you’ll be focusing on the diplomatic aspects of the situation; if you’re assigned a minister of defense role, you’ll focus on the military/security aspects; if you’re assigned the minister of finance role, you’ll focus on the economic aspects of the situation.

            We say assigned, but you will have the chance to indicate your preference for which country and which role you would like to be assigned. We’ll try to accommodate those preferences as best we can.

 

Taiwan-China Simulation Roles

 

Interested Global and Regional Powers

 

 

 

Australia

 

Minster for Foreign Affairs

 

Minister for Defense

 

Minister for Finance

 

 

 

India

 

Minister of External Affairs

 

Minister of Defence

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

Japan

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

Russia

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

South Korea

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of National Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

United States

 

Secretary of State

 

Secretary of Defense

 

Secretary of the Treasury

 

 

 

ASEAN

 

Indonesia

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

Philippines

 

Secretary of Foreign Affairs

 

Secretary of National Defense

 

Secretary of Finance

 

 

 

Malaysia

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

Vietnam

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

Singapore

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister for Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

Thailand

 

Minister of Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of Defense

 

Minister of Finance

 

 

 

European Union

 

UK

 

Secretary of State for Foreign, Commonwealth, and Development Affairs

 

Secretary of State for Defence

 

Chancellor of the Exchequer

 

 

 

France

 

Minister for Europe and Foreign Affairs

 

Minister of the Armed Forces

 

Minister of the Economy and Finance

 

 

The Role-Playing Simulation

            The simulation will take place over three class periods.  On the first day, you will start the simulation by meeting with the other students who are playing roles from the same nation. During this meeting you’ll be working on a consensus about how your nation thinks of its interests in this situation, and what steps you want to take to further those interests.  Most importantly for the simulation, you’ll be thinking of what nations you want to talk to directly and what international alliances/organizations are the proper venues for those discussions (if you want to do something beyond informal talks).  During the lecture on the situation, we’ll give a full run down on the organizations available.

One thing that you may do during the simulation is call meetings of different informal or formal multilateral organizations that exist throughout Asia or within the United Nations.

Here’s a list of some of the intergovernmental organizations or multilateral treaties/agreements in East Asia:

·         ASEAN: Association of Southeast Asian Nations: Brunei Darussalam, Cambodia, Indonesia, Laos, Malaysia, Myanmar, Philippines, Singapore, Thailand, and Vietnam 

         ARF: ASEAN Regional Forum (All nations included here are in ARF)

         ASEAN Plus 3: ASEAN members plus China, Japan, and South Korea

         ASEAN Plus 6: ASEAN members plus Australia, China, India, Japan, Korea and New Zealand

         East Asia Summit (annual meeting of the ASEAN plus Six grouping)

         AUKUS: Australia, United Kingdom, United States agreement

         The Quadrilateral Security Dialogue: an informal grouping of the Australia, India, Japan, and the US

         Regional Comprehensive Economic Partnership (RCEP): a trade agreement based in ASEAN and including the ASEAN states, Australia, China, Japan, New Zealand, and South Korea.

         Comprehensive and Progressive Trans-Pacific Partnership (CPTPP): A free trade agreement including Australia, Brunei Darussalam, Canada, Chile, Japan, Malaysia, Mexico, New Zealand, Peru, Singapore, and Vietnam

Of course, there is the UN Security Council. For the purposes of the simulation, we can assume that all 14 nations represented here are on the UNSC. China will make 15. If a UNSC meeting is called, we’ll decide how China is represented.

 

The schedule on the first day will look something like this (the schedule for the second and third days will be based on what happens on the first day, so we’ll work on that together).

·         Period 1: Each nation meets separately

·         Period 2: Nations meet informally with nations in select groupings

·         Period 3: Nations meet formally in some setting

·         Period 4: Nations meet informally with nations in select groupings (if time allows)

·         Period 5: Each nation meets separately (if time allows)

 

           

What are the goals of the simulation?

·         The goal of the simulation is for the class to work toward an agreement that reduces the likelihood of conflict across the Taiwan Strait.  Since China is not one of the participants here, the trick is to come up with a joint proposal or a set of proposals that might resolve the situation. 

·         While your papers are designed for you to take the perspective of the nation you represent and the issue-area your role is responsible for, the simulation is designed for you to work out some type of common ground between as many nations as possible that can lead to a reduction in tensions. 

·         Having said that, however, we can add this thought. Policy makers and scholars would argue that the historical record illustrates many paths to reducing the likelihood of war.  Sometimes a peace agreement is reached among the rival parties, but other times deterrence through a show of military force increases tensions in the short run, in hopes of decreasing tensions in the long run. 

·         In other words, you may be working in one or more of the multilateral organizations to produce a proposal for China and Taiwan to sign.

·         Or you may be working in one or more of the multilateral organizations to establish an Asian security organization designed to explicitly defend Taiwan (and everything in between, and even both at the same time).

·         Of course, nations may work in smaller groupings outside of any multilateral organization, and even unilaterally.

 

The Paper

            Your paper will be a research paper. Due date is on the syllabus. See the basic requirements below.  Your research question will be simple, but answering it is the fun part because you can go in many different directions. What is in your nation’s national interest when it comes to a potential conflict between China and Taiwan? Is it in your nation’s interest to side with China (bandwagoning with the rising power in the region and the world)?  Is it in your nation’s interests to side with Taiwan (balancing against a revisionist power that aims to coerce other nations in the region)?  Will you lean toward neither, but hedge a little in one direction or the other?  Is it in your nation’s interest to be neutral and to do what you can to defuse the situation (because the status quo is best for you)?

            Two important aspects of the way you answer the question are crucial:

1.      You’ll answer this question in the context of your role. If you’re assigned a minister of foreign affairs role, you’ll be focusing on the diplomatic aspects of the situation; if you’re assigned a minister of defense role, you’ll focus on the military/security aspects; if you’re assigned the minister of finance role, you’ll focus on the economic aspects of the situation.

2.      You’ll answer this by researching the issue as your nation sees it.  All of the nation’s represented in this simulation have ties to China, and almost all have ties to Taiwan in some way.  That means that all these nations have an interest in the Taiwan-China situation.  What are those interests? In your research you’ll find out what those interests are.  Your paper will explain them.

 

One way to approach this is to use a very specific structure to answer the key questions here. Your paper might look like this.

o   Introduction: summarize your paper. State your conclusions

o   Section 1: What are your nation’s relationships with China?  Would they be threatened/complicated by a conflict?

o   Section 2: What are your nation’s relationships with Taiwan?  Would they be threatened/complicated by a conflict?

o   Section 3: What are your nation’s relationships with other nations in the region (or who are not from the region, but get involved in the region, like the US or the EU)?  Would they be threatened/complicated by a conflict?

o   Section 4: Conclusions”: What is the likelihood that these relationships are threatened/complicated by Chinese coercion of Taiwan?

 

As you do this, think in terms of trade, any agreements (military ties, mutual defense agreements, diplomatic arrangements) your nation has with China, or Taiwan, or other nations in the region, and of course the implications of the growing power of China in the region and the world (including the possibility for great power conflict that might draw all the nations represented here into an actual war).  Many scholars see the Taiwan Strait as the 21st equivalent of Berlin – the place most likely to become the start of the next world war.

 

Note: Don’t get hung up on your role as you write or write this in a formal way based on making recommendations to your nation’s president or prime minister. Focus on the analysis and your assessment of your nation’s national interest.

 

Requirements of the paper

The paper will include:

·         At least 10 sources (See below lots of information on what are good sources and what are sources that are not so good).

·         A bibliography

·         None of the assigned readings for the class count as a source.  Use them, but they do not count as part of the ten sources required. 

·         Wikipedia cannot be used as one of the ten sources.  It is an encyclopedia and encyclopedias were off limits as research sources when you were in High School.  In other words: don’t use Wikipedia as a source. Do not use other web-based encyclopedias either. Oh, and don’t use Wikipedia as a source. Or web-based encyclopedias.  Sorry for being so wishy-washy on this.

·         The paper should be turned in by hard copy at the beginning of class on the day it is due or it is late.

·         If you have questions, ask sooner rather than later. 

 

Sources

            Ask us!  If you have a question on where to find sources or if you need a specific source and you can’t find it, ask us.  This is what we do for a living.

 

Library: Big building, lots of books. And people who will help you find information.  The librarian who will help POLI and INTL folks is Nia Rodgers, slrodgers@vcu.edu. She’s fantastic and knows everything!

 

Peer Review Articles from Scholarly Journals: These are the best sources. They are written by scholars like myself and your other POLI/INTL professors, then reviewed by other professors before they are accepted for publication (a horrible process similar to an intellectual colonoscopy).  But in spite of that, the result is an article that will be very helpful to you.  Most of the time they take a broad look at the issues which is helpful to you because it gives you the pros and cons for any issue the article examines. These articles also contain bibliographies and citations which you can use to find other articles on the subject.

 

How do you know what the scholarly articles are? Use scholar.google.com.  That is a specific search engine that only gets scholarly work. It eliminates websites and newspaper articles and magazines.  Remember that the web is very good for several things: information on what happened yesterday; instant opinion on what happened yesterday; instant disinformation (propaganda and outright lies about what happened yesterday); and databases on obscure things. How else would I know that in 1943 Washington quarterback Sammy Baugh led the NFL in touchdown passes, interceptions, and punting? On November 14, against the Lions, he threw four touchdown passes and intercepted four passes.  I know this from ProFootballreference.com. That’s fun. That’s the Internet. But scholarly research should start with scholar.google.com.

 

How do you find a good journal at the VCU Library? The VCU library web site is a good place to start if you want to find specific journals. Let’s say you’re interested in Asia or China. You might go to the VCU Library website. Near the top of the page, you’ll see a link for “Academics.” That will take you to a drop-down menu. Click on “Libraries.” Then you’ll see a search box. Don’t search yet. Below that click on “journal finder” and you’ll get another search box.  Type in “Asia” or “China” or the “Middle East” or whatever.  You’ll get a list of the journals that have that keyword in the title.

 

How do you find a good article at the VCU Library? This aspect is similar to what I described above, but a more specific search. You might go to the VCU Library website. Near the top of the page, you’ll see a link for “Academics.” That will take you to a drop-down menu. Click on Libraries. Then you’ll see a search box. Don’t search yet. Below that click on “Advanced.”  You’ll get a set of search boxes where you can specify what you’re looking for. So, let’s say I’m looking for information on India’s relationship with China or Taiwan. I can set the search for a subject in one field and type in “India.” Then set the search for a subject in another field and type in “China.” Then hit search.  See what you get. Then do it again with “India” and “Taiwan” as keywords. On the left you’ll see “filter options.”  You can filter it in many ways. Searching for only peer-reviewed articles is one of the options.

 

Some places or ways to look for sources

1.      Many journals are available through the VCU system and you can search through the VCU library, but you may also try Google Scholar (http://scholar.google.com/).  Use this instead of a regular search on any search engine. It will get you scholarly work, think tanks reports and journals rather than the Wikipedia entry.

2.      Keywords: For any kind of search keywords are important. You may have to do a few searches before you find the right keywords that get you all the good sources. Always try a few combinations to see what you get.  If you were looking for books or scholarly articles on Indian’s policy on Taiwan and China, you might use several combinations of these:  

a.       “India”

b.      “China”

c.       “Taiwan”

3.      Citation Tracing: Don’t forget one of the best ways to find good sources. Say you found a great article on exactly the issue you’re researching.  That article will have footnotes, endnotes, parenthetical references, and a bibliography.  Find those articles and books.  Use them.  They are almost guaranteed to be useful because the author of the great article you just read must have found them useful.

 

 

Journals/Websites/Blogs: There is a ton of stuff out there. Here is a list of sources you might use.  Again, the keyword search on scholar.google.com is the way to start. But the list below will give you an idea of what are the best places to find information because even scholar.google.com won’t necessarily tell you what sources are the most useful.

 

 

The Best Journals on East Asia

·         Asia Policy

·         Asian Survey

·         The China Quarterly

·         Contemporary Southeast Asia

·         International Relations of the Asia-Pacific

·         Issues and Studies (China and Taiwan)

·         Pacific Affairs

 

The best on Foreign Policy (that will have plenty on Asia)

·         CSIS Asia Program (Center for Strategic and International Studies)

·         CSIS China Power Project

·         The Diplomat (Journal on Asian Politics and Foreign Policy – Outstanding)

·         Every Congressional Research Service Report: Asia (US Government)

·         Foreign Affairs (the journal of the Council on Foreign Relations; the preeminent policy journal on US foreign affairs; policy-oriented)

·         Foreign Policy (journal; policy-oriented)

·         International Security (journal; MIT/Harvard one of the best on political-military issues)

·         RAND Corporation (US government-sponsored think tank; the best of the best)

·         RAND Corporation: Center for Asia Pacific Policy (CAPP)

·         RAND Corporation, Tang Institute for US-China Relations

·         Survival (journal of the International Institute for Strategic Studies; the best British think tank)

·         The Washington Quarterly (the best policy-oriented journal)

·         War on the Rocks (online; shorter academic and policy articles; outstanding; mostly practitioners, occasionally academics)

 

Bigger Lists of Journals and Sources

A bigger list: The best are indicated with an asterisk

·         ******Asian Survey (Best in the world; start here)

·         ASEAN Economic Bulletin

·         Asian Affairs

·         Bulletin of the School of Oriental and African Studies

·         China: An International Journal

·         China Economic Journal

·         *The China Quarterly

·         The China Journal

·         *Chinese Journal of International Relations (Chinese perspectives)

·         Contemporary Japan

·         *Contemporary Southeast Asia

·         The Copenhagen Journal of Asian Studies

·         Electronic Journal of Contemporary Japanese Studies

·         European Journal of East Asian Studies

·         The Journal of Asian Studies

·         India Journal of Asian Affairs

·         India Review

·         Indian Journal of Political Science

·         Indonesia

·         *International Relations of the Asia-Pacific

·         *Issues and Studies (China and Taiwan)

·         Journal of Asian History

·         The Journal of Asian Studies

·         Journal of Chinese Political Science

·         Journal of Contemporary China

·         Journal of Current Chinese Affairs

·         Journal of East Asian Studies

·         The Journal of Korean Studies

·         Journal of the Oriental Society of Australia

·         Journal of Southeast Asian Studies

·         *Japan Review

·         Modern Asian Studies

·         Modern China

·         *Pacific Affairs

·         Political Economy Journal of India

·         Sino-Japanese Studies

·         Social Science Journal Japan

·         Southeast Asian Affairs

·         Southeast Review of Asian Studies

·         Stanford Journal of East Asian Affairs

 

General International Security that will have articles on China and Taiwan

·         *Foreign Affairs (policy-oriented)

·         *Foreign Policy (policy-oriented)

·         Foreign Policy Analysis (academic)

·         The National Interest (policy-oriented)

·         **The Washington Quarterly (policy-oriented)

·         *Survival (policy-oriented)

·         Journal of Intelligence and Counterintelligence (policy-oriented)

·         The American Interest (policy-oriented)

·         Orbis (half policy; half academic)

·         Journal of Strategic Studies (half academic; half policy)

·         **International Security (academic)

·         Security Studies (academic)

·         International Affairs (London-based academic)

·         World Politics (academic)

·         Journal of Conflict Resolution (academic)

·         Armed Forces and Society (academic on civil-military relations)

·         Journal of National Security Law and Policy (legal)

·         National Security Law Journal (legal)

·         Harvard Law School National Security Journal (legal)

·         International Organization (academic)

·         *Texas National Security Review (policy)

·         *Arms Control Today (arms proliferation and nuclear weapons)

·         Bulletin of the Atomic Scientists (same as Arms Control Today)

·         Georgetown Journal of International Affairs (academic)

·         Journal of Democracy (academic, focused on human rights issues)

·         Millennium (academic)

 

 

The Best Academic/Policy Blogs

·         Taiwan-US Quarterly Analysis (Brookings Institution)

·         Just Security

·         Lawfare

·         **War on the Rocks (Excellent on China-Taiwan issues)

·         Arms Control Wonk

·         Blogs of War

·         Cipher Brief

·         Harvard Law School National Security Journal

·         Institute for the Study of War

·         Journal of National Security Law and Policy

·         Over the Horizon

·         Texas National Security Review

·         The Strategy Bridge

·         Unredacted

 

 

Web Resources on China (Think Tanks and Foundations)

·         Asia Society, Policy Institute, Center for China Analysis (multinational non-profit think tank)

·         Asia Times (news on Asia)

·         Brookings Institution Center for East Asia Policy Studies (US-Based think tank)

·         Brookings Institution: John L. Thornton China Center
Brookings-Tsinghua Center

·         Brookings Institution: where to look for information on China

·         Center for Advanced China Research  (think tank, produces analysis on Chinese politics)

·         Carnegie Endowment for International Peace: China Program

·         Council on Foreign Relations: China

·         Center for Strategic and International Studies (CSIS) China Program

·         Center for Strategic and International Studies: Freeman Chair in China Studies

·         CSIS Asia Program

·         CSIS China Power Project

·         CSIS, Asia Maritime Transparency Initiative

·         **The Diplomat (Journal on Asian Politics and Foreign Policy – Outstanding)

·         East Asia Forum (Australian National University research center)

·         East-West Center

·         **Every Congressional Research Service Report: Asia

·         Indiana University Links to Southeast Asian government web sites

·         National Bureau of Asian Research (US-based think tank)

·         Peterson Institute for International Economics: China

·         RAND Corporation: Center for Asia Pacific Policy (CAPP)

·         RAND Corporation, Tang Institute for US-China Relations

·         Stanford Center on China’s Economy and Institutions

·         Stanford University, Walter H. Shorenstein Asia-Pacific Research Center

·         Stanford University, Shorenstein Center China Program

·         US-China Policy Foundation

·         US-China Policy Foundation links

 

 

General List of Think Tanks:

The best are:

 

Excellent Ones are

·         International Crisis Group: https://www.crisisgroup.org: This is the best thing that exists on current international crises.

·         American Enterprise Institute (AEI): leans conservative, but is not too ideological

·         Arms Control Association (ACA): Non-profit organization that watches over world military trends; it has a decidedly pro-arms control attitude

·         Belfer Center for Science and International Affairs (BSCIA): The Kennedy School of Government (Harvard University) does some of the best analyses of international affairs and national security and publishes the best journal on international affairs, International Security, which can be accessed online through the VCU online journal systems.

·         Carnegie Council on Ethics and International Affairs: Focuses on Human Rights issues.

·         Carnegie Endowment for International Peace: One of the biggest and best. It is a non-profit organization, which studies international affairs and has a huge number of programs. It sponsors scholarly research on everything from non-proliferation to building civil society. See the list of "Programs" on the home page.

·         Carter Center: Former President Carter established this Center to examine international issues, host conferences, and mediate international conflicts.

·         Cato Institute: Right of center think tank that conducts research on foreign policy, national security, and economic policy, as well as domestic political issues.

·         Center for American Progress (think tank with links to the Democratic Party)

·         Center for National Policy (non-partisan center which does some national security work)

·         Center for Non-proliferation Studies (CNS) at the Monterrey Institute of International Studies, which is one of the best sources on information on the spread of weapons of mass destruction

·         Center for Strategic and International Affairs (CSIS): attached to Georgetown University. It produces reports on national security, and is filled with ex-government officials

·         Coalition to Reduce Nuclear Danger: A center-left organization that focuses on US and international nuclear weapons policy.

·         Columbia International Affairs Online (CIAO): Columbia University’s compilation of papers, journals, web sites, and other resources on international affairs. It’s not a think tank itself, but collects information from think tanks, government, and other academic circles on international affairs and national security. You may need to use your VCU password and login to get into this system. It has a specific link to Working Papers from various think tanks and scholarly institutes.

·         Council for a Livable World: Center-left in its ideology and focuses on ways to reduce the proliferation of weapons of mass destruction and reign in US defense expenditures and deployments.

·         Federation of American Scientists (FAS): Non-profit organization that watches over world military trends.

·         Global Security.Org (excellent resources for international diplomatic, military, and political issues)

·         Heritage Foundation: Right of center think tank that conducts research on foreign policy, national security, and economic policy, as well as domestic political issues.

·         Hudson Institute: Center-right think tank that conducts research on foreign policy, national security, and economic policy, as well as domestic political issues.

·         Institute for Defense Analysis (IDA): Non-profit think tank that does a lot of work for the US government on national security issues. Much of its research is available online.

·         Institute for Defense Studies and Analysis (IDSA): A think tank that looks at many international security issues, particularly east and South Asia. It is an Indian institute based in New Delhi.

·         International Republican Institute (Republican Party-affiliated organization that analyzes world affairs and supports programs that help nations make the transition to democracy)

·         Institute for Security Studies: (Based in several nations in Africa – Ethiopia, Kenya, Senegal, and South Africa)

·         National Democratic Institute for International Affairs (Democratic Party-affiliated organization that analyzes world affairs and supports programs that help nations make the transition to democracy)

·         National Endowment for DemocracyA private, non-profit organization that is funded by the US Congress.  Its goal is to foster democracy around the world through programs and research

·         National Security Archive: This is a non-profit organization that gets the US government to declassify documents relating to US foreign affairs (through Freedom of Information Act requests) then makes those documents available to the public. Some are available online. All are available at the Archive itself (In George Washington University’s library. You can contact the Archive and make an appointment to go there.) Some are also available to purchase in sets.

·         Natural Resources Defense Council (NRDC): Non-profit organization that watches over world military trends

·         New America Foundation (centrist think tank that looks at domestic and international issues)

·         Nixon Center: Non-Profit organization that studies foreign and national security policy, leans toward republican ideas

·         Nuclear Threat Initiative (non-profit, non-partisan group that analyzes and lobbies on nuclear proliferation issues)

·         Project for a New American CenturyNew think tank that espouses and develops neoconservative views.

·         Project on Defense Alternatives (center-left)

·         Henry L. Stimson Center: Non-profit organization that watches over world political and military trends, in particular United Nations peace operations

·         Stockholm International Peace Research Institute (SIPRI): Non-profit organization that watches over world military trends

·          Western States Legal Foundation: A pro-arms control group watching over US defense expenditures and deployments and their impact on the public among other things.

·         Woodrow Wilson International Center for Scholars: Supports scholarly research on a number of international topics. In particular, its Cold War International History Project provides support for scholars using declassified documents to understand what was really going on in Washington and Moscow during the Cold War.

·         Union of Concerned Scientists: Center-left in its ideology and focuses on ways to reduce the proliferation of weapons of mass destruction and reign in US defense expenditures and deployments.

·         United States Institute for Peace (USIP); Funded by the US Congress, it is a non-partisan organization that sponsors and published research concerning conflict prevention and conflict resolution

 

 

A Note on Good Sources and Bad Sources

The Internet: You cannot do this type of research only from websites.  Do not expect to be able to sit in front of your computer without using scholar.google or the VCU library system and find all the information you need.  Remember that the primacy purpose of the Internet is advertising (even what passes for information is often really advertising its information). The web tells you that everything you need is on the web. That is not true.  It is especially not true when it comes to scholarship. 

 

A Warning about the Web: We don't think we need to tell you much about the web. In college Newmann wrote papers on a manual typewriter and he took his SATs on stone tablets. Newmann didn’t learn much about Taiwan and China while in college because the Qin emperor had just been overthrown. But if you do have any questions about it let us know. An important note about Internet sites: what is crucial about any webpage is that you know what the source of the information is. All information on the web is not equal. Before you trust any information on the web you must know who runs the websites. Who is the source of the information? Nazi Parties from various countries have many websites. Their information is probably not a source you want to use for research on Israeli foreign policy, for example.  If you’re researching Chinese foreign policy, you need to know if the source is from the Chinese government or a scholarly source. Their views might be very different. There is a ton of propaganda on the web. Many governments in the world are not Democratic. They don’t have freedom of the press, but they do have a huge presence on the Internet where they disseminate propaganda that tries to influence the world’s judgment of their actions.  China, Russia, or North Korea are good examples of nations that use propaganda on the internet as part of their “influence operations” that try to make their governments look warm and fuzzy while they imprison government critics.

 

Even in Democracies you need to be careful of the sources. The Republican Party and the Democratic Party both have their own web presence that is designed to make them look good, and make their political opponents look bad.  Media often has a perspective as well (left, right, center, celebrity, sensationalist, scandal…whatever).  In short, always be mindful of where the information comes from.  The web is a smorgasbord of conspiracy theories. That’s one of the most difficult aspects of our information environment.  There are so many sources of information and many of them are just garbage. Remember that on the web you can find a lot of information on these topics, NONE OF THE FOLLOWING ARE TRUE!!!!!

·         How President George W. Bush launched the September 11 attacks so he could repeal the 2nd Amendment

·         How George W. Bush invaded Iraq in 2003 to steal all Iraq’s oil and prevent Saddam Hussein from disclosing that the Bush family had been controlling global oil prices for decades in league with the Saudi Arabian royal family

·         How Barack Obama was born in Kenya and sneaked into the US at an early age so he could become President; he was doing this under the orders of al-Qaeda

·         How the Affordable Care Act (that created near universal healthcare in the US) had a section allowing a small government committee to decide who would live or die when they reached old age (the “death panels”)

·         Again: NONE OF THESE ARE TRUE, but there are sadly way too many people who believe this stuff because it is on the Internet.

·         Oh, and there was an Italian website about fifteen years ago that linked me to the Kennedy assassination. I am not kidding. I had just turned two when Kennedy was killed. If I was involved in the plot, I don’t remember. 

 

How do you tell what is good and what is bad? That’s difficult, but here are some keys to it:

·         Beware of “news” sites where all the articles are designed to frighten you about the dangers of this or that

·         Especially be wary of “news” sites which try to frighten you and tell you the sky is falling, then move to a commercial break and try to sell you something that will save your life when the sky does fall. These are essentially infomercials masquerading as news.

·         Beware of “news” sites where everything comes from one extreme perspective -- all the problems of the world are caused by a specific politician, or a specific political party, and there is never any middle ground or alternative perspective. Many legitimate news sites are accused of that by their competitors; if you actually read those news sites, you find that the accusation is false.

·         News organizations get things wrong from time to time. That doesn’t mean bias. That means that journalists are human. The difference between real news and “fake” news is simple. Fake news is propaganda designed to push a political agenda by making you believe something that is false.  Real news is an attempt to get to the truth. Sometimes that doesn’t always happen. Journalists can use a bad source or forget what they learned in journalism school because they are so excited to get a scoop. Journalists can make honest mistakes, and there are bad journalists who may make bad mistakes. The difference is this: when a good newspaper or website gets it wrong, they fix the mistake and they often fire or demote the reporter.  They also have multiple reporters working on any sensitive story because they want to make sure they have a lot of eyes on the subject.  Bad newspapers or websites tell a story, and when someone proves that it is wrong, they don’t care. They continue to push the story because they aren’t interested in getting it right; they are interested in selling the story to achieve a political goal.  That’s not news; it is propaganda.

 

Remember there is a ton of disinformation and misinformation from conspiracy theory folks and foreign governments trying to influence US politics, and sadly by politicians and activists in the US who are working hard to spread propaganda.  If you’re not sure ask us or go to a fact checking site:

·         Fact Check.Org From the Annenberg Center at the University of Pennsylvania

·         PolitiFact.com From several newspapers

·         The Fact Checker From the Washington Post

·         Snopes.com (fact checking and debunking urban legends and internet hoaxes that are often about politics)

Citations and Bibliography

Read this. Pay attention to it or face everlasting doom!

The following is not just because we want to annoy you or because we like to have things done our way.  The following is because this is a class where you will do social science research and the rules of social science research are different from the rules of English composition or journalism.  Learning how to write for different audiences and in different styles is part of the university experience.

You must use an established format for citations and your bibliography.  You need to learn how to reference information properly, and how to write a bibliography with the correct and complete information before you leave VCU. This is easy to do, but more important than you think. Whether you go into academia or business you will be judged on the quality of your information, and that means people will want to know where you found your information. They will judge you at first, before they read your text, on your bibliography and citations. If you do it wrong while at VCU, you’ll get a deduction from your grade.  If you do this in graduate school or government or the business world, you will be asked to go home and not come back (as in “you’re fired”).

Here are resources that will teach you to do this:

·         When in doubt, use this: Chicago Style Citation Format (not Chicago Style Pizza; no deep-dish citations)

·         Or you can use one of the assigned books in the class as a template for citation style.

·         Or use these online resources:

o   Easy Bib

o   APA Style

o   MLA Style (Remember that for this assignment you need page numbers even f MLA says you don’t).

o   Bibme

o   Purdue OWL (Online Writing Workshop)

·         Or use scholar.google.com: Let’s say you found an article on this page (or even if you didn’t you can look it up on scholar.google.com anyway by typing in author and title). Once you get the article in the list of sources, you’ll see underneath the source a large quotation mark. Click that and you’ll get a list of different versions of the correct citation for the source. You can cut and paste. This doesn’t work for books; the citations they have for books are not quite correct.

 

The Evils of In-Text Citations

In the social sciences, particularly Political Science, do not use the long format in-text citations. That may be good for English or journalism, but not for scholarly social science. What I mean is the following.  Let’s say you used a book by Rush Doshi called The Long Game: China’s Grand Strategy to Replace American Order, and you want to cite some information from it (Doshi was hired as the Biden administration’s senior director for China on the National Security Council staff).

·         Never write a sentence like this: Rush Doshi, a Biden administration official, states in his book The Long Game: China’s Grand Strategy to Replace American Order that China seeks hegemony is East Asia.

·         Even this is something to avoid: According to Doshi, China seeks hegemony in East Asia.

·         Instead write a sentence like this: China’s grand strategy is designed with the goal of replacing the US as the most powerful nation in East Asia (add citation for Doshi there).  The citations are there so you don’t have to include the author’s info in the text.  That just takes up space, clutters up your writing, and is not scholarly.

 

Since we have instructed you to pay attention to notation and bibliographic style, and have provided you with a specific place to look for the proper styles, we will take points off of your paper if you do not do this in the correct manner. This is simple. If you do not do it correctly it means one or both of the following: 1) you are not taking the assignment seriously; and/or 2) you are doing the paper at the last minute. Both of these are good reasons why you will not get the grade you are able to earn.

 

Bibliography: The bibliography is a list of all the sources you’ve used. List anything you found useful even if it only confirmed information you found in other places, even if you have not cited the source in the paper; you don’t realize how much you learned from sources even if you don’t reference specific information from them.  The bibliography is listed in alphabetical order by the author’s last name. There may be no author or you may get info from a website. See the above resources for the rules on that.

Citing Information for Footnotes/Endnotes/Parenthetical References

What do I need to cite? That’s a question students ask all the time. This section describes why and when you cite information. In doing research there are three basic types of things you must cite: quotes, specific information, and other people’s ideas. 

·         Do Cite: Quotes: This is a short paper. Try not to quote.  Some people think that you only need to cite quotes.  You do need to cite quotes, but here you don’t want to quote unless it’s a word or two from a government official whose exact words matter. See below on the proper use of quotes. But you absolutely need to cite much more than quotes in social science.  

·         Do Cite: Specific Information: When we say specific information, what we refer to is any information which is not general knowledge.  For example, you would not need to use a citation if you state that Henry Kissinger was Richard Nixon’s National Security Adviser in Nixon’s first term (general knowledge).  But you would have to cite the fact that Kissinger met with Chinese Premier Zhou Enlai on July 9, 1971 and any details of the meeting.

·         Do Cite: Other People’s Ideas: If you’re doing research and you’re thinking about the issue you’re researching, any idea that is not yours absolutely must be cited. Take the issue of Chinese grand strategy mentioned above. Let’s say you read in Doshi’s book that Chinese President Xi Jinping’s goals to return China to great power status really aren’t new goals formulated by Xi, but a continuation of Chinese goals that date back to the collapse of the Qing dynasty in the early 20th century. You want to make that point in your paper.  You agree with Doshi (or maybe you don’t agree with Doshi). Either way, you want to include that point in your paper (to agree or to disagree).  Since the idea comes from Doshi, you need to cite the idea (Doshi 2021, p. 31).

 

Page numbers

If you are referring to specific information that you found on a specific page in a source (if the source has page numbers, unlike some web sources), you must include the page number where you found the information.  Let’s say you found information in a book that is 450 pages long. Citing the book and not the page number is not very helpful for anyone who thought that the information was interesting and wanted to learn more about it.  You’re forcing that person to scan through 450 pages of text to find the info. Instead, cite the exact page number where you found the information and then the reader can just turn to that page number.  This is the established method of citation. This is true even for parenthetical references.  If you are citing the main point of an article or book or something as background information, you don’t need the page number, but if it is specific material, it does need a page number.

 

Numbering Endnotes

This paper only uses endnotes (but these rules are the same for footnotes if you use them for other classes). In the social sciences, endnotes are numbered consecutively.  The first note is number 1; the second is number 2, etc.  Microsoft Word will do this for you.  You can use a source more than once in your paper.  There are specific citation formats for the first citation and for the second citation.  You can also put more than one source in a specific note.  See my article for examples for all of this: Endnotes/Footnotes.  A short reference follows:

·         Footnotes and endnotes are numbered consecutively (1, 2, 3, 4…) (Unless you use the natural sciences-style that merges the bibliography and citations as explained above)

 

On Writing a Good Introductory Paragraph

This is the key to writing a good paper so I am providing detailed instruction on this. Political Science has a specific style of writing, especially when it comes to introductory paragraphs.  It mirrors the style of government memoranda.  In short, the introductory paragraph should summarize the paper and that includes giving the reader a summary of your conclusions.  If you don’t do this, even a great paper, becomes a grade of B. 

A good introductory paragraph should include the following:

·         your topic; or the question you are answering if you set up the issue that way

·         how you will answer the question

·         what are the basic answers to the questions regarding your issue -- your conclusions

In other words, the introduction should provide your reader with a "road map" that explains exactly what you will say during the paper. This is not as difficult as it sounds. Basically, what you need to do is write the outline you have for your paper in sentences in the first few paragraphs of the paper. Your opening paragraph (or couple of opening paragraphs) should also give the reader some reason to be interested in your topic and in your argument. Tell the reader why this subject is important. Here is an example of an opening paragraph: (I’ll use a topic that won’t overlap with anyone’s potential topic.)  This paragraph is based on a paper that I wrote for a conference in 2022.  I’ve added parentheses to indicate what purpose that sentence serves. These are just for illustration purposes; you should not do that in your paper.

 

 

In the summer of 2021, open-source intelligence and US government intelligence discovered what appeared to be new Chinese ICBM silos under construction at two locations in the interior of China (tells the reader the subject). The US should assume that these new deployments are just the beginning of a large and sustained Chinese effort to match US and Russian nuclear capability (tells the reader the paper’s assumptions). All our current theoretical paradigms suggest that China, as a rising power, will try to challenge US hegemony (tells the reader the perspective of the paper.) Realist theory predicts that an up-and-coming challenger will try to balance against or even replace US regional and global power.  Liberalism explains global stability and cooperation as a result of common values and shared interests in a rule-based international order; rising powers will seek to change those rules.  Constructivism sees nation-states foreign policies as derived from cultural and historical factors. It might predict that Chinese foreign policy will seek to right the perceived wrongs of Chinese history by returning China to its rightful, dominant position in East Asia (these three descriptions give the three theoretical perspectives). Given that nuclear weapons are a fundamental part of any superpower’s power and status, the US needs to prepare for a new nuclear age where the US, Russia, and China are equals, and where Chinese nuclear strategists debate the wisdom of assured destruction or warfighting-based nuclear doctrines just as the US did during the Cold War.  US efforts should turn toward helping China become a “responsible stakeholder” of the nuclear balance by engaging China in the types of confidence and security building measures as well as arms control that heralded the détente relationship between the US and the USSR (these sentences give the reader the recommendations).

 

So, this paragraph tells me what you think, summarizes why you think that is true, and explains how you will illustrate your point.

 

You can use lots of topic headings and subheadings to correspond to the points on your "road map" -- they'll help you organize your thoughts, and they'll help your reader clearly identify where he is on the "road map." The above paper might have six main paragraphs:

 

o    Introduction: Your intro paragraph(s)

o    Background on the Chinese nuclear developments

o    What realism predicts about Chinese foreign policy

o    What liberalism predicts about Chinese foreign policy

o    What constructivism predicts about Chinese foreign policy

o    Conclusion/Recommendations

 

As you make the points that support your argument, you'll probably be aware of the places in which your argument is controversial or in which a reasonable person might disagree with you. Preempt those controversies in your text. Point out what those opposing arguments might be, and why you think your point of view is more accurate or reasonable.

 

Quotes

1.      Use quotes sparingly. We want your writing, not anyone else’s.  If there is a great quote from a direct participant in the event, a phrase, or word, that you think really adds to the paper then a quote may be appropriate here or there.  But if you have a paragraph-length quote in a six-page paper, that would be bad.  I’d be sad and after you see your grade, you’ll be sad too.

2.      Don’t quote general information that you found in a scholarly article and don’t quote the conclusions of other scholars.  Paraphrase the information or the idea in your own words and then cite the source.

3.      Do not write a sentence in your paper that quotes that information directly from the source.  For example, don’t quote like this: “The United States included 20,000 troops.” It is basic factual information and does not need to be quoted, but it does need to be cited.  Even if it is an analyst’s opinion, it does not need to be quoted.  Just paraphrase it in your words and cite the source.

4.      Reserve quotes for direct participants: candidates and their staffers, or a voter.  The exact words matter in these cases.  In general, though, go easy on quotes. 

5.      Too many quotes means that you’re just cutting and pasting, not writing.  A research paper is not a series of quotes rearranged the way you like.  It doesn’t teach you anything and your grade will suffer horribly, terribly, and painfully. 

6.      So, for example, if noted China scholar Reed Richards says in his book that “China does not have the amphibious landing craft to invade Taiwan.”  Do not write a sentence in your paper that reads: Reed Richards says that “China does not have the amphibious landing craft to invade Taiwan.”  It’s better to write something that says: One scholar argues that China does not have the naval capability to launch an amphibious landing on Taiwan.” (Add the citation here which cites Richards’ book and the page number in it where the information is found). The full bibliographic information will be in the bibliography at the end of the paper. 

7.      In a larger paper, but not in this one, sometimes quotes are useful.  A good quote is this one. In his October 2022 work report to the 20th Communist Party Congress, Xi Jinping stated that “We will continue to strive for peaceful reunification with the greatest sincerity and the utmost effort, but we will never promise to renounce the use of force, and we reserve the option of taking all measures necessary.His exact words are important.  (And cite the source; by the way the source is: Lyle Morris. “Listen to Xi Jinping about Taiwan.” War on the Rocks, November 18, 2022, https://warontherocks.com/2022/11/listen-to-xi-jingping-about-taiwan/

8.      In any case: Never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever cut and paste anything from a source into your document unless you place it in quotes and cite the source of the quote.  And generally, in a paper that is under a few dozen papers, there is never a need to quote anything that is not an official source.  Why quote anything unless the exact words are crucial?  So, quoting a President or Foreign Minister or a witness to an event is useful, but quoting a scholar or journalist is not. 

 

Plagiarism and Avoiding It (Or “How to Use Other People’s Ideas Legitimately”)

First, never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever cut and paste anything from a source into your document unless you place it in quotes and cite the source of the quote. And generally, in a paper that is under a few dozen papers, there is never a need to quote anything that is not an official source.  Why quote anything unless the exact words are crucial?  So, quoting a President or Foreign Minister or a witness to an event is useful, but quoting a scholar or journalist is not.  For the purposes of this paper, there is no reason to quote anyone. The paper is too short for quotes.

This is really not a fine line.  Did you write the sentence or not? Did you come up with the idea or not?  When in doubt, it’s relatively simple: never include something in your paper that you did not write unless it is placed in quotes, and then it also must be cited.  Anything that is not your idea must be cited. Plagiarism is a violation of the VCU Honor Code and I will not hesitate to charge someone with a violation if I catch plagiarism.  If you have questions about plagiarism, ask me or see VCU’s Writing Integrity Workshop. 

But just because someone else has already written an idea that you agree with 100% doesn't mean you can't discuss it in your paper. Just point out whose idea it is; paraphrase it in your own words, cite the source of the idea, and expand upon it. Generally, that is how Political Science works. 90% of all Political Science articles and books do the following (I give you another example that is not topically relevant to the class):

 

There are various explanations for the Clinton administration’s decision to grant China permanent most favored nation trading status. Barton accuses the Clinton administration of hypocrisy, campaigning on a human rights platform only to abandon it once in power and satisfying the business community revealed itself as the real priority.[1] Rogers argues that Clinton learned during his first year of office that sanctions on China would accomplish very little and only slow and steady engagement would ultimately improve China’s human rights situation over the long term.[2] Romanoff focuses on the internal bargaining within the administration and the ability of President Clinton’s economic advisors to best a human-rights first coalition of advisors from the State Department and NSC staff.[3]  Each of these arguments has merit. A combination of the second and third arguments, emphasizing Bill Clinton’s learning process, holds the most explanatory power.

 

The article would then outline the theories of Barton, Rogers, and Romanoff, analyze each one, and then develop the fourth theory. There is no problem as long as Barton, Rogers, and Romanoff get credited with developing their theories, and the fourth theory is yours. If the fourth theory belongs to a fourth author (Banner? Danvers? Fury?), the author should be credited and your article will show why his theory is superior to the other three.  The point here is that you may find sources which have different opinions on an issue. 

 

If paraphrasing an idea: make sure to change the verb you use so it is different from the verb used in the source.  Make sure you change everything but the proper nouns. So, let’s say, you’ve read this in your source: “The President phoned the Prime Minister immediately after he received the news.”  That may be the point you want to make in your paper, but you shouldn’t quote that and can’t copy it (or you’d be plagiarizing).  The only words you really can use here would be “President” and “Prime Minister.”  These are the proper nouns. So put it into your own words.  How about: “Once the President had been informed, he contacted the Prime Minister.” And then cite the source of the information.  That would not be a quote problem or a suspicion of plagiarism

And never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever cut and paste anything from a source into your document unless you place it in quotes and cite the source of the quote.  (He said it again! And in italics! Must mean something!)

Nitpicks and Style Issues (Or Helpful Hints)

1.      Margins and Font Papers should be doubled-spaced with one-inch margins, and reasonably sized font (11 or 12 point). Shorter pages with wide margins and large print size fonts will be penalized.

2.      Subject and Verb Make sure you have a subject and verb in every sentence. (You would be surprised how many important journals and books allow non-sentence sentences). This is non-fiction, not fiction. So, you need to observe the basic rules of grammar. A long sentence is not necessarily a better sentence -- each sentence should express only one thought. Don't be afraid to break up a long sentence into two or three shorter ones. It will usually flow better that way.

3.      Official Titles Provide someone’s title in the text the first time you mention them if they are an elected official (Tim Kaine, Governor of Virginia) or an appointed official (Assistant Secretary of Defense for International Security Affairs Paul Nitze).  Thereafter, you can refer to them as Kaine or Nitze. So, for the first mention, you’d say: “National Security Advisor Henry Kissinger told his assistant to.…”  From that point on, you can simply say “Kissinger told his assistant to…” When you mention a senator or representative, say: Senator John Warner (R-VA) to introduce and after that you can just say Warner or Senator Warner.

4.      Keep a Copy Make a copy of the paper for yourself before you hand it in to me. There are two reasons for this. If you have a copy, you don't have to worry about me losing a copy. I have never lost anyone's paper, but just in case you should always make sure that you have a copy of your paper with you, in any class, not just this one.

5.      Back up WHEN YOU TYPE YOUR PAPER ON A COMPUTER MAKE SURE YOU HAVE A BACKUP DISK WITH THE PAPER ON IT. AS YOU TYPE THE PAPER SAVE THE FILE TO THE BACKUP DISK EVERY TEN MINUTES OR SO. Don’t just leave it on your hard drive and hope it will be safe.  A super safe way to deal with this is to use your own, already built-in cloud system.  Email the drafts of your paper to yourself and then you know it will be safe on the VCU system and you can access it from anywhere on the planet. Also, remember that if you type on the university computers be careful. Putting your paper on the hard drive in the computer lab is risky – they sweep the hard drives of files at night. Keep a backup copy for yourself. I have several backup copies of anything I write. You don't ever want to lose work because you didn't back it up.

6.      No Wikipedia Do not use Wikipedia or any other web-based encyclopedia.  It is unreliable and you should have stopped using encyclopedias for research in elementary school.

7.      Reliability of the Internet Be careful about internet sources.  Make sure the source is reliable.  Remember that anyone can post anything on the internet.  There aren’t necessarily any editors or fact checkers.  For example, there is a website that links me to the Kennedy assassination; I was two years old. Ask me if you have questions about this (internet sources, not if I was involved in the Kennedy assassination; I wasn’t).

8.      The use of “I”: Try to avoid using “I” in non-fiction.  Instead of “I will discuss three problems…” say “This essay addresses three problems…”

9.      The use of a semicolon: Semicolons connect two complete sentences that are related to each other.  For example: “I went to the pizzeria to get a pie; it was closed so I had Chinese food instead.”  You could also write them as two separate sentences if you wanted.  The following would be an incorrect use of a semicolon: “I had six very tasty pizzas last week; except for that crappy one from the big chain store.”  That should be a comma, not a semicolon.  The test is this:  If the two sentences you are connecting with a semicolon could stand alone as complete sentences, then use a semicolon.  So, it becomes obvious: “Except for that crappy one from the big chain store” is not a sentence.

10.  The use of “however”: “However” trips everyone up.  It’s a bit similar to semicolons.  “I went to the pizzeria; however, when I got there, it was closed.”  Notice the semicolon, not the comma.  That’s because “When I got there, it was closed” could be a complete sentence by itself.  Also, this sentence is like the use of a semicolon.  You are connecting two complete sentences.  In this case, you’re connecting two sentences that are related, but related in a very specific way.  The second sentence is adding the “however” to show a different expectation than the first sentence implies.  The first sentence implies you were going to eat pizza.  The second sentence says you didn’t.   On the other hand, look at this example: “I went to the pizzeria.  Upon arriving, however, I found out it was closed.”  The “however” is surrounded by commas.  That’s because “upon arriving” is not a sentence by itself.  Here’s another aspect of this.  “I went to the pizzeria, the one with the best pizza in the world.”  There is a comma there because “the one with the best pizza in the world” is not a sentence by itself. These are the non-fiction rules. In fiction, you can do anything you want.

11.  Some useful rules:

1.      Numbers under 100 should be written as out.  So, you would not have this sentence.  “President Bush met with 3 advisors.”  It would be “President Bush met with three advisors.”

2.      When you have an acronym, such as NSDD-75 or UN.  First write out the name in full: National Security Decision Directive (NSDD) 75, or United Nations (UN). After that first use of the term, use the acronym.

Late Papers

Papers are due at the beginning of class on the date indicated in the syllabus. After about 10 minutes of class has passed, your paper is one day late.  That is true for the rough draft and the final draft in cases where a rough draft is mandatory. I will mark late papers down ONE GRADE for each day late. That means that an almost perfect paper -- one that I would give 98 points to -- becomes an 88 if one day late, 78 if two days late, etc., all the way down to 8 points if nine days late, and zero points if ten days late.

            In classes where a rough draft is mandatory (if the rough draft is optional, ignore this): These deductions count for both the rough and final draft.  For example, if you turn in the rough draft one day late and the final draft one day late, you will have twenty points deducted from your paper grade.  For the rough draft the maximum penalty is 50 points for five days late that will be deducted from the final grade.  If you don’t turn in a rough draft that will be 50 points off.

            Talk to me if you are having some family or personal problems. If there is a serious need to get an extension on the paper, I will give you an extension.  I do realize that there are more important things in life than this class and this assignment.  So, if you run into a problem, talk to me. Computer problems do not count as a problem that warrants an extension.  If you are writing your paper at the last minute and you have a problem, the moral of the story is that you should not have been writing your paper at the last minute.  If you have a printer problem, that doesn’t have to be a problem.  Give me your disk and I will print up the paper, or come to my office hours and we'll print up the paper at my office.  If you have some kind of computer problem, and you are not writing your paper at the last minute, let me know.  Maybe I can help.

 



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