POLI 308 Research Paper

Fall 2023

 

Explaining the Trump phenomenon.  Your assignment is to write a paper analyzing two explanations for the swift rise of Donald Trump, and his ability to reshape the Republican Party to such a degree that being a Republican today is more about loyalty to Donald Trump than it is about any set of ideas or policy agenda.  Details are below.

 

Due Date is listed on the syllabus

This is big and has very important information in it.  For that reason, I’ve created a Table of Contents (linked to sections below) for you to use to find information you’re looking for.  You should read this entire assignment, however.  I guarantee you will wind up with a better grade if you do.

 

The Assignment        

Requirements

Paper Structure

Rough Drafts (Optional)

Sources

Citations and Bibliography

Bibliography

Citing Specific Information

Page Numbers

Numbering Endnotes or Footnotes

Introductory Paragraph

Quotes

Plagiarism

Nitpicks and Style Issue (or Helpful hints)

Late Papers

 

 

The Assignment

You may love Donald Trump; you may hate him.  There probably aren’t a lot of people who have no opinion of him.  Trump is unique in American history for a number of reasons.

·         He is the American variant of the populist nationalism sweeping the globe.

·         He has attacked the institutions of American government -- the intelligence community, the independence of the judiciary, and the concept of checks and balances that place limits on presidential power in ways that no president has ever done before.

·         He has remade and arguably shattered the Republican Party; it is now loyal to Trump in ways that surpasses even Democratic Party loyalty to FDR and old Republican Party loyalty to Reagan.

·         He made his initial political mark spreading conspiracy theories about Obama not being born in the US – an absolute lie. There is not a drop of evidence Obama wasn’t born in Honolulu, Hawaii.  He has continued to peddle discredited conspiracy theories.

·         As a candidate and as president, Trump lied every day. In quantity and quality, his lies made Richard Nixon (Republican President 1969-1974) and Bill Clinton (Democratic President 1993-2001) look like paragons of honesty.  His lies were also unique in many ways. He lied to cover up his own actions that might have been illegal and lied to discredit his political opponents (the typical political lies – instrumental; see Nixon and Clinton as examples). Trump’s lies were unique in American presidential history because Trump also created his own alternative world where history was different, cause and effect are different, and things like evidence and facts are irrelevant.  One of his White House staffers even explained to the press that the Trump administration liked to present “alternative facts.”

·         He has encouraged his supporters to use violence on numerous occasions, even promising them that if they are arrested, he would pay for their legal defense.

·         He has perpetuated what is being called the “Big Lie” – the accusation that the 2020 election was a fraudulent one, stolen from him by Joe Biden. Again, there is absolutely no evidence of large-scale or even any organized fraud in the 2020 election. None. No official, Republican or Democratic, who counted any votes in 2020 has claimed they saw any significant fraud. Over 60 court cases have rejected lawsuits claiming there was fraud.  Even media outlets who reported cases of fraud related to voting machines have now rescinded those reports.

·         Unlike any other losing candidate in US history, Trump continues to dispute Biden’s legitimacy as president, using the charges of fraud as his rallying cry for his 2024 election bid. And let’s be absolutely clear about this: comparative politics scholars have noted time and again that one of the key signs of a democratic nation on the verge of collapse is when a political leader attacks the electoral system as fraudulent.  If his loyal supporters love him so much that they lose faith in the system, even though there is no evidence of any fraud in the system, the notion that any vote can be free and fair could disappear. Generally, it leads to violence – perhaps groups storming the capital to prevent votes from being certified (January 6, 2021). That’s where we are in the US right now. 

·         Donald Trump’s rhetoric is seen by many, even many Republicans, as the inspiration for one of the most disturbing days in US history – the January 6, 2021 assault on the Capitol Building by people who claimed the 2020 election was stolen from Trump.  Trump was impeached by the US House of Representatives on January 13, 2021 for “incitement of insurrection,” but acquitted in the US Senate.

·         The 2021 impeachment of Trump was his second impeachment (also a precedent).  He was first impeached by the House in December 2019 for holding up aid to Ukraine unless the Ukrainian president announced an investigation into Joe Biden’s policies toward Ukraine while Biden was Vice President. Trump was then acquitted by the Senate in 2020.

 

The list above may include some of the reasons you love Trump or hate Trump, but it is a unique record in the American presidency.  The question becomes this one: why does someone with such a controversial record in office have such loyal support?

 

There are many theories about this and your paper will assess two of those ideas. There are lots of theories. Some are better than others. Your job will be to take two and consider how well they explain the rise of Trump in US politics. In short: who supports Trump and why?

 

The Role of Polarization

A lot of the theories relate to the thesis that the US is becoming a more and more politically polarized nation.  Republicans have become more conservative; Democrats have become more liberal.  There are fewer people in the middle and fewer and fewer people are “ticket splitting,” the old practice of voting for one party at one level (senate of president) and voting for another party at another level (house or local election). Our voting patterns reflect that sharpening polarization.  But why is there polarization and what does it have to do with Trump’s victory?  Here are some theories about why there is polarization. Some are better than others, but they are all part of the mix.

·         Polarization is caused because of a divide between urban and rural areas.  University towns vote like urban areas and the suburbs are where the competition is.

·         Polarization is caused by key cultural issues, notably abortion and same sex marriage.

·         Polarization is caused by a religious divide. Evangelicals are the most solid supporters the Trump candidacy and presidency

·         Polarization is caused by gerrymandering, in which state and House districts are drawn to favor one political and consigning the other to minority status. Computing power gives parties amazing accuracy in drawing districts to gain advantage. This makes gerrymandering a science, not an art and increases polarization.

·         Americans increasing vote based on identity. Because Americans are mobile, we move more often than people in other nations, over the past forty years or so Americans have sorted themselves. We now live in areas with people who are similar to us in identity. That reinforces the identity and makes us think more like those around us and less like those who live in other places. As we choose to live with like-minded people, the identities are hardening and diverging.  In blunt terms, someone who owns a gun, listens to country music, and watches NASCAR has nothing in common with someone who owns an electric car, listens to new age music, and watches experimental theater. They live in different Americas.

·         Media, particularly social media, increases polarization. The loudest voices dominate the debate, placing everyone on fighting terms because we have come to believe caricatures of people in the opposing party. Therefore, we don’t see each other as Americans trying to create a more perfect union in slightly different ways. We see ourselves as patriots fighting our political opponents who want to destroy America.

·         Negative Partisanship relates to the above assessment. We don’t necessarily support our own candidate or party, but hate the other party and the other candidate. We have to defeat “them.”

·         Polarization isn’t an accurate assessment of voting patterns. Elites are polarized; the people are not.  The negativity actually decreases voter turnout. Those who do vote are the most committed to their party and therefore the voting seems polarized. In reality, most Americans are in the middle and disenchanted with their leaders.

 

These are nice theories and very interesting ideas, but they don’t explain well enough. If the US is polarized, how does a polarized America vote for Obama twice and then vote for Trump?  They are very different types of politicians with very different ideas. Something else is needed to explain the way the Republican Party has become the Trump party.

 

The Theories

Polarization may be the starting point for your analysis. Here are some of the theories. This is not a complete list, so feel free to find others and use them for your paper. These are just some examples.  Some of them are different versions of the same idea, but that represents the wide array of ideas out there.

·         The Rise of Populist Nationalism: Populist nationalism is a term used to describe the emergence in the early 20th century of politicians that attract an almost cult like following through the use of a set of familiar themes: blaming economic problems on elites, the media, foreigners, and immigrants (choose your scapegoat of the moment). By using a clear differentiation between “us” and “them”, these politicians ride a wave of sentiment calling for a return to the good-old days, good old days that have been ruined by “them”.  In this theory, Trump is the American version of populist nationalism.

·          The New Media: Donald Trump is the master of social media and uses it better than any of his Republican or Democratic rivals.  No one can grab people’s attention like Trump, and that makes him the center of American politics.

·         Trump and Star Power: Trump was a celebrity, a reality TV start and billionaire and he turned that into star power. Even people who disliked him tuned in to watch him.  The networks covered him as if he were a celebrity not a presidential candidate. New coverage of Trump set ratings records and networks made billions of dollars off of that coverage.  The coverage was so extensive that one estimate calculated that if Trump had had to pay for his coverage on television, it would have cost him about $2 billion dollars. This means that Trump essentially got $2 billion dollars of free campaign coverage. None of his Republican or Democratic rivals got anything like that coverage.  In the era of social media, attention and exposure, whether good or bad, seems to be the currency of the realm.  And no one gets attention better than Trump. Therefore, he has captured the Republican Party, and the loyalty of millions of Americans. 

·         Strategy and the Midwest: In 2016 and 2020 Trump focused on the Midwest. Clinton did not, and Biden had trouble getting the Midwest back from Trump voters. Trump won several states in 2016 that went for Obama in 2008 and 2012, states most people felt Clinton should have won. Biden barely won them in 2020. Why the strategy difference? What did Trump know that Clinton and Biden do not?

·         Digital/Computer Revolution: The world in is the midst of an economic and technological revolution in society as big as the shift from hunting-gathering to agriculture or from agriculture to industrial society (the industrial revolution). These economic and technological revolutions reshape societies fundamentally.  We are just at the beginning of a new age and our old industrial era institutions aren’t ready for these changes. We’re beginning a long era of economic, social, and political instability. Donald Trump was the only candidate to run against those institutions explicitly.  His populist movement is the same type that is sweeping Europe. Its greatest supporters are those who feel the digital/computer revolution is leaving them behind.  This may be simply the first in a series of upheavals. Thirty years from now our political system might be completely different – new parties, more than two parties, very different norms for political behavior.  Essentially, the old parties and system have not adapted – we get polarization and gridlock – and the US people want something different. Trump was the most different candidate available, and voters are now loyal to his message and approach.

·         Collapse of Manufacturing and the Opioid Epidemic: These are two sides of an argument.  It goes like this. Traditional US manufacturing has been declining for decades.  Blue Collar factory jobs have been shipped overseas or have been replaced by technology (robots). That has meant millions of Americans are out of work in small towns throughout the Midwest in particular. These were places that depended on factories and where people could get good jobs right out of High School. That has ended. These are also the same places where the opioid epidemic is centered. Massive job loss leads to hopelessness and drug addiction. That’s a simplified version of it, but essentially summarizes the argument. Trump campaigned on the themes of trade and bringing manufacturing back.  In strategy terms, Trump understood the problem better than anyone else, and has captured the loyalty of people who feel left out.

·         Evangelical Mobilization: Donald Trump was able to get evangelical voters out to the polls and they supported him like they have not supported any other recent candidate.  The reason for that is complex, but most arguments suggest this: evangelicals see American culture shifting away from their values (legalization of same sex marriage, expansion of LGBTQ+ rights, the decline of religious belief in the US, the sense that Christians are being persecuted in the US).  To evangelicals, Trump gets it, and his slogan – Make America Great Again – is about rolling back those changes in American culture.  There are different versions of this idea. Some refer to this as a renewed Christian Nationalism.  Some argue that Christians are being persecuted (charges that there is a “War on Christmas”).  Some argue that this is a reaction to court rulings that have ended conservative Christians’ ability to define the terms of religious freedom for more liberal Christians and for non-Christians, an end to conservative Christian hegemony in the US.

·         Cultural Backlash: Obama’s election was historic.  He was the first African-American president.  After a quiet start his administration pushed for the recognition of same-sex marriage.  It mobilized to end discrimination against transgender Americans. Obama used some interesting legal maneuvers to implement his DACA program (allowing legal protections for children brought to the US illegally by their parents).  The Black Lives Matter movement had support from the Obama administration Justice Department as well. Democrats then nominated the first woman to ever be the presidential candidate for any major political party in US history.  Some scholars argue that this was too much change too quickly for many Americans.  The Trump Presidency represents about 30% of the population slamming their feet on the brakes of the nation.  In this sense, Trump leads a coalition of groups who felt the nation was shifting too far to the left.  Many see this rooted in racism, a sort of resurgence of white nationalism.  At its most extreme, it is modern Klan-type behavior as was seen in Charlottesville in 2017, and ideological focuses on the “Great Replacement” theory – the notion that there is a vast global conspiracy of Jews who are trying to replace a white majority in North America and Europe with immigrants from Africa, Asia, the Middle East, and Latin America in order gain dominance over white people in those areas.  Remember the rallying cry in Charlottesville from the people carrying torches at the protest marches: “The Jews will not replace us.”

·         Gender or Race Gaps: Demographically, if you are white, you are more likely to vote Republican than Democratic.  If you are a minority, you are more likely to vote Democratic. If you are a man, you are more likely to vote Republican. If you are a woman, you are more likely to vote Democratic.  If you live in a rural area, you are more likely to vote Republican. If you live in an urban area, you are more likely to vote Democratic. Are we seeing polarization by geography (the “Big Sort” is what it is sometimes called)? Trump has explicitly made himself the champion of a movement dominated by white, male, rural voters, and they are now his loyal supporters.  This is mostly a matter of economic interests in this analysis. The interests of rural voters are very different than the interests of urban voters.  The gender and racial issues may or may not be incidental in this analysis.

·         Coastal Elite: Many Trump supporters and some media analysts suggested that the victory of Trump and the continued underestimation of his chances of winning (both in the primaries and the general election) were due to the bias of the coastal elite: wealthy elites and media outlets who live, work, and only pay attention to the east coast and west coast. These elites treat the rest of the nation as “flyover territory,” parts of the country they never visit, don’t care about, and generally ignore. The 2016 Trump victory and Trump’s loyal following represent a revolt by the people who live in these areas who are tired of being ignored, and want to take back the nation from the coastal elites who have been imposing their policies on the rest of the nation.

·         Ideological Change in the Republican Party and the Victory of New Conservative Media: Many moderate Republicans (supporters of Jeb Bush or John Kasich, the candidates who were supposed to be the front runners in 2016, but who were trounced by Trump) argue that conservative media has redefined the Republican Party. Since the 1990s, hyper-conservative media outlets and pundits (Rush Limbaugh, Fox News, Glenn Beck, and more) have been pushing their own version of conservatism, much as in the 1950s publications like the National Review began to try to change American conservatism.  In both cases, the media centers and individual commentators make an ideological argument and then try to get the Republican Party to accept that argument.  The new conservative media spread its ideology so well that it moved the Party away from traditional Republicanism (small government, low taxes, strong internationalist foreign policy, and free trade economics) toward a new Republicanism that is accepting of more government intervention in the economy, more nationalist in its foreign policy, protectionist on trade, but still for lower taxes.  Trump’s victory represents the triumph of that new conservative ideology. It became the ideology of the Republicans Party even as elected Republicans and institutions like the Republican National Committee fought the ideology.  The birth of the Tea Party was a grass roots movement fueled by conservative media which often fought the traditional Republican Party and the elected Republican members of the House and Senate. If you were an elected Republican and you weren’t conservative enough in the eyes of this new conservative media, it would turn against you and you would get a challenge in the Republican primary (the birth of a new word: “primaried.”) The new conservatism represents simply the evolution of conservatism.

·         The Rise of Conspiracies: In a twist on the argument above, this new conservatism often goes hand in hand with a belief in vast conspiracies and a strong belief in “facts” that simply aren’t actual truths. The Trump campaign spread many of these falsehoods, picked up from these new conservative outlets and some bizarre ones on the fringe, and re-popularized them. Trump himself made his name in politics spreading the lie that Obama was born in Kenya.  QAnon supporters have been elected to congress and they are often the most vocal Trump supporters. QAnon is a bizarre conspiracy theory arguing that the Clintons, Obama, Biden, and the Democratic Party are involved in a global human trafficking organization where children are kidnapped so that Democrats can drink their blood and gain immortality.  Trump was elected to put an end to the human trafficking and rescue the world’s children.  Yes. This is what QAnon believes. It has roots in the anti-Semitic conspiracies about Jews controlling the world and drinking the blood of Christians. It’s nutso stuff, and it’s hard to believe that anyone believes it, but members there are several members of congress who won their elections in the House because they believed in it.

·         Great Recession Anger: Trump’s victory represents the anger of the average person over the Great Recession. Nearly ten years after the recession, the consensus of the political class is that the US has recovered and everything is fine.  The average person, however, still feels the impact of it, something that the political class does not notice. The success of Trump and Sanders in 2016 represents a voter rejection of both traditional parties, who have not responded to the Great Recession in a satisfactory way.  Voters are angry about it. They want something different and Trump was the most different of the candidates (not even a politician).

·         It Really is Snake Oil: Get ready for this one. Trump has been called a “snake oil salesman,” a reference to the American tradition of traveling salesmen selling remedies (maybe “snake oil” for “whatever ails ya.” Of course, the remedies cured nothing and the salesman with the miracle cure was nothing but a con man. The old Broadway musical The Music Man is about that type of character; there’s a great Simpsons episode about bringing a monorail to Springfield, and best of all play on the old story is a Twilight Zone episode, Mr. Garrity and the Graves, where the con man promises to bring back dead relatives of the towns folk in 19th century Arizona.  I can’t tell you how it works out because it would spoil the story, but let’s just say not everyone wants to see their old friends and relatives come back to life. Trump has made millions on actual scams (See Trump University and the lawsuits related to it). But this idea is a spin on it, a wild one: If you look at the pioneers of the new “conservatism” in American media – Limbaugh, Tucker Carlson, Glen Beck, Alex Jones – you’ll find something interesting. A large percentage of their sponsors (the people who pay to advertise on their broadcasts or who are their main sponsors) are nutritional supplements.  Glenn Beck took it even further for a while, claiming that Democrats were going to lead the world into a new Great Depression that would collapse civilization while his sponsors sold seeds, gold, and survivalist equipment.   Sounds silly, but the dietary supplement market in the US is a 164-billion-dollar industry (2022), and is projected to be worth about 345 billion by 2032). The point: see the fine print in the ads: these statements have not been evaluated by the Food and Drug Administration.  Here’s a massive industry dedicated to preventing the government from regulating an aspect of health in the US, opposed to actual scientific study of the benefits or not of these products, and generally hostile to doctors who might point out that the supplements you’re taking do absolutely nothing.  It partially explains the hostility to government regulation of the health care industry and Clinton/Obama health plans (because they would expand access to doctor-prescribed medicines) and to the anti-vaccine movement (which says that vaccines based on scientific research are dangerous, but nutritional supplements whose usefulness (efficacy) is based on nothing bur marketing are better for you).  This industry has linked itself with the political movement that supports Trump because Trump would shatter the power of the FDA to regulate the industry.

 

For an examination of some of these ideas in relation to the 2016 election, you can read an essay I wrote for the POLI Facebook page in 2016. It tries to explain Trump’s success in 2016 through a number of lenses.  It was finished in October 2016 before Trump was elected. 

 

A great way to start this is to read columns by Thomas Byrne Edsall, a writer for the New York Times, who has written excellent essays on exactly this. See a list of his columns here.  Here are some of his more recent ones, but going back to 2016, you’ll see excellent essays looking at just this issue.  You can use them for your paper.  Just a quick note though: Don’t cite information and use in text citations the way he does.  He’s a journalist and uses journalist conventions for citations. You are Political Scientists and must use Political Scientists methods of citations.  On those methods, see below or ask me.

·         For Some Key Voters, Trump Has Become Toxic,” July 5, 2023

·         As the Suburbs Go, So Goes America,” June 7, 2023

·         “Is the Surge to the Left Among Young Voters a Trump Blip or the Real Deal?” May 24, 2023

·         Why Trump Still Has Millions of Americans in His Grip,” May 5, 2021

·         Why Trump Is Still Their Guy,” April 21, 2021

·         In God We Divide,” March 25, 2020

 

 

Requirements

 

 

A structure for your paper might look like this:

·         Introduction (one paragraph to one page in length; summarize the paper and make sure you state your conclusion)

·         Analysis of Theory 1 (explanation and strengths and weaknesses based on your analysis of the argument) (4-5 pages)

·         Analysis of Theory 2 (explanation and strengths and weaknesses based on your analysis of the argument) (4-5 pages)

·         Conclusion (restate the question and your conclusion about which theory explains the rise of Trump the best. You might conclude one if better than the other. You might conclude that the two theories need to be used together to really explain it. There is no right answer here. There just needs to be an argument that explains why you have come to your conclusion and it needs to have some data backing it up) (1-page tops).

 

Rough Drafts

            Up until the rough draft deadline indicated on the syllabus, I will look at anything you’d like me to look at regarding the paper.  Anything from outlines, bibliographic sources, or even completed drafts can be turned in for comment up until that date.  I will go over what you have, mark it up, and if you like give you a hypothetical grade.  You can then make revisions based on my comments.

 

 

Sources

There are lots of sources out there. Some are better than others. That’s one of the tricks of doing research—finding the good stuff.

 

Books: Books are still the best sources out there, but your research will not lean as heavily on books for this paper as it might for other assignments.  This is very current research and books take a while to write.  You will still need some (see the requirements above).  This means going to the library if you want to use them. Use the Library: Really!!!!  Here’s what I mean: Library.  The following is useful for this class or any other where you have to do research.

·         Why are books important? They will give you some context and context is everything.  Whenever you read about an event or a trend, you need to ask questions: Has this ever happened before? How often does this happen? Is this typical or unusual?  For example, when Democrats took the House in November 2018, was it a revolution (unusual and important) or was it to be expected (a president’s party usually loses seats the first midterm after a new president is elected). That is context and context is everything. Books and good scholarly journal articles provide that context.  Newspapers usually don’t and the web doesn’t remember yesterday.   The answer is that a president’s political party generally loses seats in the first midterm after an election. In the 20th century, only 1934 and 2002 are exceptions. Cases where a president’s party lost both the House and the Senate and the president then was reelected are not that unusual (1946, 1954, and 1994).   For scholarly journals start with scholar.google).

·         How do you find a good book? You might go to the VCU Library website. Near the top of the page, you’ll see a link for Academics. That will take you to a drop-down menu. Click on Libraries. Then you’ll see a search box. Don’t search yet. Below that click on “Advanced.”  You’ll get a set of search boxes where you can specify what you’re looking for. So, let’s say I’m looking for information on India’s nuclear weapons capability (something not a subject here, but provides a good example). I can set the search for subject in one field and type in “India.” The set the search for subject in another field and type in nuclear weapons. Then hit search.  That gives me 2300 sources. Too many. So, on the left you’ll see filter options.  Click on that and you’ll get several ways to limit the search: Just books and media or just peer-reviewed articles are two of the ways to do this.

·         A Book’s Bibliography is a Search Engine: Best of all, books have bibliographies listing dozens of other sources on the issue, high quality sources used by the authors to write their books.  In the case of the student researching India’s nuclear weapons, he now had two books that listed over 100 sources on the Indian nuclear weapon program.  Instead of a google search that takes hours to sift through poor quality information that takes days, the student was now holding all the information he needed and a source that would help him find more sources.  Magic!

·         Library Shelves are Search Engines: Once you find one book on a subject, you’ll go into the shelves of the library and find out that the book is shelved with all the other books on the same subject.  So, if you needed into on India’s nuclear weapons program, all the books on that subject will be sitting on the shelf next to each other. Once you find one, you’ll find the others.

·         Citation Tracing: Don’t forget one of the best ways to find good sources. Say you found a great article or book on exactly the issue you’re researching.  That article will have footnotes, endnotes, parenthetical references, in addition to the bibliography.  Find those articles and books.  Use them.  They are almost guaranteed to be useful because the author of the great article you just read must have found them useful.  In the case of the student researching Indian nuclear strategy, he read a paragraph on India’s “no first use” doctrine (India would not initiate the use of nuclear weapons in a conflict; it would only respond to a nuclear attack; a policy currently under review). He was interested in that in particular. He read the three or four pages on that then looked at all the books and articles and government documents the author cited on the issue and compiled a list of over 20 sources just on that idea.  Cool.

 

Search Engines: Be careful of a google search for scholarly research: Remember that you can google something easily and get a list of 39,000 sources in under one second. But how good are those sources? That’s unclear. You’ll get everything from a scholarly book to a government report to a scholarly article to a web site to a blog written by someone who thinks fluoride in the water is a plot by North Korea to make us all sterile!  The Internet is filled with conspiracy theories and lies and insanity. Finding the good information is difficult.

 

Scholarly Articles: There are lots of different sources of information for you. The best ones for scholarly research (what you’ll do in college) are scholarly articles. These are articles that take a long time to write; they are fact checked and reviewed by maybe a half a dozen people before they are published.  The information is accurate and the analysis is thoughtful. That’s where you’ll find your best information. How do you know what the scholarly articles are? Use scholar.google.comThat is a specific search engine that only gets scholarly work. It eliminates websites and newspaper articles and magazines.  Remember that the web is very good for several things: information on what happened yesterday; instant opinion on what happened yesterday; instant disinformation (propaganda and outright lies about what happened yesterday); and databases on obscure things. How else would I know that in 1943 Washington quarterback Sammy Baugh led the NFL in touchdown passes, interceptions, and punting?  On November 14, against the Lions, he threw four touchdown passes and intercepted four passes.  I know this from ProFootballreference.com. That’s fun. That’s the Internet. But scholarly research should start with scholar.google.com.

·         To find good journals: Just about every Political Science and Public Policy journal will be a potential source for you.  We’re talking about dozens.  The key for you is recognizing what is a scholarly refereed journal (articles written by scholars, reviewed by scholars, and fact-checked) vs. journalistic sources (good for what happened when, but not as concerned with balanced analysis and not concerned with theory at all). This link will take you to a list of refereed Political Science and Public Policy journals.  It is not exhaustive, but it’s a good place to start.

·         How do you find a good article at the VCU Library? Go to the VCU Library website. Near the top of the page, you’ll see a link for “Academics.” That will take you to a drop-down menu. Click on Libraries. Then you’ll see a search box. Don’t search yet. Below that click on “Advanced.”  You’ll get a set of search boxes where you can specify what you’re looking for. So, let’s say I’m looking for information on India’s nuclear weapons capability. I can set the search for subject in one field and type in “India.” The set the search for subject in another field and type in nuclear weapons. Then hit search.  That gives me 2300 sources. Too many. So, on the left you’ll see “filter options.”  Click on that and you’ll get several ways to limit the search: just peer-reviewed articles is one of the options.

 

News Magazines: Here is a link to a list of the best news magazines that cover politics (weekly and monthly). That is a good place to start. These have good analytical pieces and often publish excerpts or short articles based on larger scholarly or journalistic work. The big difference between these sources and scholarly journals is that they often have a political slant.  It’s very important to know when you’re reading something that is slanted to the left or slanted to the right.  Not everything is partisan (leaning toward one party or the other), but a lot of it is.  There is more just plain old, non-partisan analysis than people think and that is, of course, the best to use.  More liberal analysis or more conservative analysis is very useful as long as you know that it has a perspective.  For instance, The Nation leans left. It’s a good magazine, but remember that it leans left.  The National Review is a good magazine, but remember that it leans to the right.  Also, newspapers like the New York Times, Washington Post, or Wall Street Journal are good traditional non-partisan newspapers.  They want to get the story right and you can trust their reporting.  They can get stories wrong, but it’s not because they have a bias, but because sometimes they get a story wrong.  Their editorial pages, however, do have a perspective (center-left for the Times and Post); center-right for the Journal. Remember that when you use any newspaper.  Good newspapers believe in what they call the separation of church and state, meaning the separation between the reporters covering events and the editorial pages of the paper, which is designed to state an opinion. 

 

Keywords: For any kind of search keywords are important. You may have to do a few searches before you find the right keywords that get you all the good sources. Always try a few combinations to see what you get.  If you were looking for books or scholarly articles on political polarization or Trump’s support, you might use several combinations of these:

·         “polarization”

·         “Trump supporters”

·         “US voting behavior”

·         “Trump election”

·         “Republican party”

·         “Red and blue states”

·         “2016 election”

  

The Internet: Be careful of the internet.  There is good information and there is bad information.  Scholarly work and journalism are still better sources for information that a lot of web sites which are just propaganda or poorly researched opinion pieces. Remember that the primacy purpose of the Internet is advertising (even what passes for information is really advertising its information). The web tells you that everything you on the web is absolutely accurate and truthful. That is not true.

·         A Warning about the Internet: I don't think I need to tell you much about the Internet. In college I wrote papers on a manual typewriter and I took my SATs on stone tablets. But if you do have any questions about it let me know. An important note about Internet sites: what is crucial about any webpage is that you and I know what the source of the information is. All information on the web is not equal. Before you trust any information on the web you must know who runs the websites. Who is the source of the information? The US Nazi Party has many websites. Their information is probably not a source you want to use for research on Israeli foreign policy, for example.  If I’m researching Russian foreign policy, I need to know if the source is from the Russian government or a scholarly source. Their views might be very different. There is a ton of propaganda on the web. Many governments in the world are not democratic. They don’t have freedom of the press, but they do have a huge presence on the Internet where they disseminate propaganda that tries to influence the world’s judgment of their actions.  China, Russia, or North Korea are good examples of nations that use propaganda on the internet as part of their “influence operations” that try to make their governments look warm and fuzzy while they imprison government critics. Even in democracies you need to be careful of the sources. The Republican Party and the Democratic Party both have their own web presence that is designed to make them look good and make their political opponents look bad.  Media often has a perspective as well (left, right, center, celebrity, sensationalist, scandal…whatever).  In short, always be mindful of where the information comes from.  The web is a smorgasbord of conspiracy theories. That’s one of the most difficult aspects of our information environment.  There are so many sources of information and many of them are just garbage. Remember that on the web you can find a lot of information on these topics, NONE OF THE FOLLOWING ARE TRUE!!!!!

o   How President George W. Bush launched the September 11 attacks so he could repeal the 2nd Amendment (Not true)

o   How George W. Bush invaded Iraq in 2003 to steal all Iraq’s oil and prevent Saddam Hussein from disclosing that the Bush family had been controlling global oil prices for decades in league with the Saudi Arabian royal family (Not true)

o   How Barack Obama was born in Kenya and sneaked into the US at an early age so he could become President; he was doing this under the orders of al-Qaeda (Not true)

o   How the Affordable Care Act (that created near universal health care in the US) had a section allowing a small government committee to decide who would live or die when they reached old age (the “death panels”). Not true)

o   Again: NONE OF THESE ARE TRUE, but there are sadly way too many people who believe this stuff because it is on the Internet.

o   Oh, and there was an Italian website about fifteen years ago that linked me to the Kennedy assassination. I am not kidding. I had just turned two when Kennedy was killed. If I was involved in the plot, I don’t remember. 

·         How do you tell what is good and what is bad? That’s difficult, but here are some keys to it:

o   Beware of “news” sites where all the articles are designed to frighten you about the dangers of this or that

o   Especially be wary of “news” sites which try to frighten you and tell you the sky is falling then move to a commercial break and try to sell you something that will save your life when the sky does fall. These are essentially infomercials masquerading as news.

o   Beware of “news” sites where everything comes from one extreme perspective -- all the problems of the world are caused by a specific politician, or a specific political party, and there is never any middle ground or alternative perspective. Many legitimate news sites are accused of that by their competitors; if you actually read those news sites, you find that the accusation is false.

o   News organizations get things wrong from time to time. That doesn’t mean bias. That means that journalists are human. The difference between real news and “fake” news is simple. Fake news is propaganda designed to push a political agenda by making you believe something that is false.  Real news is an attempt to get to the truth. Sometimes that doesn’t always happen. Journalists can use a bad source or forget what they learned in journalism school because they are so excited to get a scoop. Journalists can make honest mistakes, and there are bad journalists who may make bad mistakes. The difference is this: when a good newspaper or website gets it wrong, they fix the mistake and they often fire or demote the reporter.  They also have multiple reporters working on any sensitive story because they want to make sure they have a lot of eyes on the subject.  Bad newspapers or websites tell a story and when someone proves that it is wrong, they don’t care. They continue to push the story because they aren’t interested in getting it right; they are interested in selling the story to achieve a political goal.  That’s not news; it is propaganda.

 

Citations and Bibliography

Read this. Pay attention to it or face everlasting doom! Failure to pay attention to this will likely result in a grade of D.

The following is not just because I want to annoy you or because I like to have things done my way.  The following is because this is a class where you will do social science research and the rules of social science research are different from the rules of English composition or journalism.  Learning how to write for different audiences and in different styles is part of the university experience.

You must use an established format for citations and your bibliography.  You need to learn how to reference information properly, and how to write a bibliography with the correct and complete information before you leave VCU. This is easy to do, but more important than you think. Whether you go into academia or business you will be judged on the quality of your information, and that means people will want to know where you found your information. They will judge you at first, before they read your text, on your bibliography and citations. If you do it wrong while at VCU, you’ll get a deduction from your grade.  If you do this in graduate school or government or the business world, you will be asked to go home and not come back (as in “you’re fired”).

It does not matter to me what format you use, as long as you use an established standard format for the social sciences. You can use footnotes or endnotes or parenthetical references, but you must learn to do it correctly.  Here are web resources that will teach you to do this:

 

 

The Evils of In-Text Citations

In the social sciences, particularly Political Science, do not use in-text citations. That may be good for English or journalism, but not for scholarly social science. What I mean is the following.  Let’s say you used a book by Gabriel Weimann called Terror on the Internet for your research and you want to cite some information from it.

 

Since I have instructed you to pay attention to notation and bibliographic style, and have provided you with a specific place to look for the proper styles, I will take points off of your paper if you do not do this in the correct manner. This is simple. If you do not do it correctly it means one or both of the following: 1) you are not taking the assignment seriously or are too lazy to do the paper correctly; and/or 2) you are doing the paper at the last minute. Both of these are good reasons why you will not get the grade you are able to earn.

 

The Bibliography

The bibliography is a list of your sources. Alphabetize it by the author’s last name or by the title of the article or book if there is no author.  Some important aspects of it follow.

·         In a bibliography you don’t need to list page numbers when you cite a book. You may have used one page. You may have used 70 pages.  Whatever you use, just cite the book and don’t include any page numbers.

·         In a bibliography, you do need to cite page numbers for a journal article. You cite the full range of page numbers for the article (first page to last page).  The exact page numbers only need to be included for the citations in the paper when you are citing the exact page where you found the information.  In the bibliography, cite the page range of the entire article.

·         Notice also that the bibliographic format and the footnote/endnote format are almost the same. The only differences are the page numbers you need for one vs. the other and that in a bibliography the author’s last name comes first and in a footnote/endnote it is first name, then last name. That is important because it means that you can cut and paste to make a bibliography cite into a footnote/endnote cite and vice versa.

·         See my examples for all of this.

·         Single space the citations and add a space between each citation.

 

Citing Information for Footnotes, Endnotes, or Parenthetical References

Footnotes, endnotes and parenthetical references are the three ways to cite information.  On formats, see the above links.  This section describes why and when you cite information. What do I need to cite? That’s a question students ask all the time. In doing research there are three basic types of things you must cite: quotes, specific information, and other people’s ideas. 

·         Quotes: This is a small paper. Do not quote.  Some people think that you only need to cite quotes.  You would need to cite them if this was a larger paper where quotes might be appropriate, but you absolutely need to cite much more than quotes in social science.  There are more warnings about quoting material below.

·         Specific Information: When I say specific information, what I refer to is any information which is not general knowledge. For example, you would not need to use a citation if you state that Henry Kissinger was Richard Nixon’s National Security Adviser in Nixon’s first term (general knowledge).  But you would have to cite the fact that Kissinger met with Chinese Premier Zhou Enlai on July 9, 1971 and any details of the meeting. Another example: you would not need to cite that Chinese economic reforms were first announced at the Third Plenum of the 11th Central Committee of the Chinese Communist Party, but if you included information on why Hua Guofeng’s attempt to establish his own Mao-like authority had failed in part because his economic reform plan was not farsighted enough and why this failure allowed Deng to push his reform plan through the Central Committee, you’d need to cite the source (Schram 1984, 417) or use a footnote[1] or endnote.[1]

·         Other People’s Ideas: If you’re doing research and you’re thinking about the issue you’re researching, any idea that is not yours absolutely must be cited. Take the issue of Indian nuclear strategy mentioned above. If one author says that Indian nuclear doctrine has changed drastically since India’s decision to build a full-fledged arsenal in 1998, that idea has to be cited.

Page numbers

If you are referring to specific information that you found on a specific page in a source (if the source has page numbers, unlike some web sources), you must include the page number where you found the information.  Let’s say you found information in a book that is 450 pages long. Citing the book and not the page number is not very helpful for anyone who thought that the information was interesting and wanted to learn more about it.  You’re forcing that person to scan through 450 pages of text to find the info. Instead, cite the page number and then the reader can just turn to that page number.  This is the established method of citation. This is true even for parenthetical references.  If you are citing the main point of an article or book or something as background information, you don’t need the page number, but if it is specific material, it does need a page number. If you do not cite page numbers, the earth will spin off its axis and plunge into the sun, and you will be responsible for it.

 

Numbering Endnotes or Footnotes

You may use endnotes. You may use footnotes, but then the paper must be a bit longer since some of the page will be taken up by footnotes. In the social sciences, footnotes and endnotes are numbered consecutively.  The first note is number 1; the second is number 2, etc.  Microsoft Word will do this for you.  You can use a source more than once in your paper.  There are specific citation formats for the first citation and for the second citation.  You can also put more than one source in a specific note.  See my article for examples for all of this: Endnotes/Footnotes.  A short reference follows:

·         Footnotes and endnotes are numbered consecutively (1, 2, 3, 4…) (Please don’t use the natural sciences-style that merges the bibliography and citations.  This format lists the sources in a bibliography and numbers them, then cites information in the text by listing the number of the source used in the bibliography.  That format is for natural sciences and I have never seen it used in any Political Science journal.  Since this is Political Science, you should learn how Political Science works.

On Writing a Good Introductory Paragraph

This is the key to writing a good paper so I am providing detailed instruction on this. Political Science has a specific style of writing, especially when it comes to introductory paragraphs.  It mirrors the style of government memoranda.  In short, the introductory paragraph should summarize the paper and that includes giving the reader a summary of your conclusions.  If you don’t do this, even a great paper, becomes a grade of B. 

A good introductory paragraph should include the following:

In other words, the introduction should provide your reader with a "road map" that explains exactly what you will say during the paper. This is not as difficult as it sounds. Basically, what you need to do is write the outline you have for your paper in sentences in the first few paragraphs of the paper. Your opening paragraph (or couple of opening paragraphs) should also give the reader some reason to be interested in your topic and in your argument. Tell the reader why this subject is important. Here is an example of an opening paragraph: (I’ll use a topic that won’t overlap with anyone’s potential topic.)

 

This paper will analyze the origins, objectives, and doctrines of al-Qaeda (AQ).  AQ is currently the world’s largest and most active terrorist organization – global in activity, recruitment, and mission.  It is a curious mixture of 21st century technology and medieval ideology.  (That’s the topic.) Its origins date back to the Soviet invasion of Afghanistan in 1979 when militants from all over the Middle East and Asia came to Afghanistan to fight the “infidel” invaders.  Its goals are diverse, but call for the alteration of the political landscape of the Middle East and an end to US influence in that region. The doctrines are a mixture of radical Islamic ideas (indeed in many ways very un-Islamic) and Arab nationalism. (That’s how you will explain your issue—by discussing three sub-topics:  1) initial origins; 2) its goals; and 3) doctrines.)  Overall, the goals don’t sound very realistic, or very negotiable.  While AQ can launch terrorist activities around the world, its ability to actually control territory or capture a nation state is limited.  However, it may have the ability to harass, damage, and attack the targets for decades to come.  (Those are your conclusions.) 

             

You can use lots of topic headings and subheadings to correspond to the points on your "road map" -- they'll help you organize your thoughts, and they'll help your reader clearly identify where he is on the "road map." The above paper might have five main sections:

  1. Introduction:
  2. Origins of AQ
  3. Objectives
  4. Doctrines
  5. Conclusions (Analysis)

 

Quotes

1.      Use quotes sparingly. I want your writing, not anyone else’s.  If there is a great quote from a direct participant in the event, a phrase, or word, that you think really adds to the paper then a quote may be appropriate here or there.  But if you have a paragraph-length quote in an eight-page paper, that would be bad.  I’d be sad and after you see your grade, you’ll be sad too.

2.      Don’t quote general information that you found in a scholarly article and don’t quote the conclusions of other scholars.  Paraphrase the information or the idea in your own words and then cite the source.

3.      Do not give me a sentence in your paper that quotes that information directly from the source.  For example, don’t quote like this: “The United States included 20,000 troops.” It is basic factual information and does not need to be quoted, but it does need to be cited.  Even if it is an analyst’s opinion, it does not need to be quoted.  Just paraphrase it in your words and cite the source.

4.      Reserve quotes for direct participants: candidates and their staffers, or a voter.  The exact words matter in these cases.  In general, though, go easy on quotes. 

5.      Too many quotes means that you’re just cutting and pasting, not writing.  A research paper is not a series of quotes rearranged the way you like.  It doesn’t teach you anything and your grade will suffer horribly, terribly, and painfully. 

6.      So, for example, if noted terrorist scholar Reed Richards says in his book that “Al-Qaeda probably only consists of 10,000 people worldwide.”  Do not give me a sentence in your paper that reads: Reed Richards says that “Al-Qaeda probably only consists of 10,000 people worldwide.”  Give me something that says: One scholar estimates that al-Qaeda only has 10,000 active members globally (Add the citation here which cites Richards’ book and the page number in it where the information is found). The full bibliographic information will be in the bibliography at the end of the paper.  Or if Ben Grimm concludes in his book that: “Al-Qaeda’s growth depends on economic reform in the Middle East.  Elimination of poverty is not the biggest problem. Rather it is the ability of the middle class to gain social and economic mobility.”  Don’t quote that, but say: Grimm’s conclusions suggest that economic reforms designed to allow the middle class to grow and prosper will be the key to battling al-Qaeda in the future (Add the endnote here which cites Grimm’s book and the page number in it where the information is found). 

7.      In a larger paper, but not in this one, sometimes quotes are useful.  A good quote is this: According to Osama bin-Laden, “for over seven years the United States has been occupying the lands of Islam in the holiest of places, the Arabian Peninsula, plundering its riches, dictating to its rulers, humiliating its people, terrorizing its neighbors, and turning its bases in the Peninsula into a spearhead through which to fight the neighboring Muslim peoples” (Add the endnote here which cites Bin-Laden’s fatwa and the page number in it where the information is found or the internet URL).  This is an excerpt from the 1998 fatwa of OBL.  Bin-Laden is a participant, a historical figure.  His exact words are important.

8.      In any case: Never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever cut and paste anything from a source into your document unless you place it in quotes and cite the source of the quote.  And generally, in a paper that is under a few dozen papers, there is never a need to quote anything that is not an official source.  Why quote anything unless the exact works are crucial?  So, quoting a President or Foreign Minister or a witness to an event is useful, but quoting a scholar or journalist is not. 

 

Plagiarism and Avoiding It (Or “How to Use Other People’s Ideas Legitimately”)

First, never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever cut and paste anything from a source into your document unless you place it in quotes and cite the source of the quote. And generally, in a paper that is under a few dozen papers, there is never a need to quote anything that is not an official source.  Why quote anything unless the exact works are crucial.  So, quoting a President or Foreign Minister or a witness to an event is useful, but quoting a scholar or journalist is not.  For the purposes of this paper, there is no reason to quote anyone. The paper is too short for quotes.

This is really not a fine line.  Did you write the sentence or not? Did you come up with the idea or not?  When in doubt, it’s relatively simple: never include something in your paper that you did not write unless it is quotes and then it also must be cited.  Anything that is not your idea must be cited. Plagiarism is a violation of the VCU Honor Code and I will not hesitate to charge someone with a violation if I catch plagiarism.  If you have questions about what is plagiarism, ask me or see VCU’s Writing Integrity Workshop. 

But just because someone else has already written an idea that you agree with 100% doesn't mean you can't discuss it in your paper. Just point out whose idea it is; paraphrase it in your own words, cite the source of the idea, and expand upon it. Generally, that is how Political Science works. 90% of all Political Science articles and books do the following (I give you another example that is not topically relevant to the class):

 

There are various explanations for the Moscow coup in August 1991. Stan says the military instigated the overthrow (Stan 1994, 1-34). Kyle disagreed, saying the military prevented the coup from being successful (Kyle 1997, 17-29). Cartman says the coup failed because its leaders were inept (Cartman 2000, 307-332). However, all three authors understate the impact of public opinion; the coup really failed because of the Russian people's yearning for Democracy.

 

The article would then outline the theories of Stan, Kyle, and Cartman, criticize each one, and then develop the fourth theory. There is no problem as long as Stan, Kyle, and Cartman get credited with developing their theories, and the fourth theory is yours. If the fourth theory belongs to a fourth author (Kenny? Timmy? Professor Chaos?), the reader must be told that the fourth theory is Kenny's and your article will show why his theory is superior to the other three.  The point here is that you may find sources which have different opinions on an issue.  For example, one source may say that Hezbollah has ties to Syria and another may say it doesn’t.  You need to decide who’s right.  State that there are differences of opinions.  Cite the sources. Who says there are ties? Who says there aren’t? Then you can, if you want, suggest what you think based on your research.  Or you can simply say that a dispute exists and leave it at that.

If paraphrasing an idea: make sure to change the verb you use so it is different from the verb used in the source.  Make sure you change everything but the proper nouns. So, let’s say, you’ve read this in your source: “The President phoned the Prime Minister immediately after he received the news.”  That may be the point you want to make in your paper, but you shouldn’t quote that and can’t copy it (or you’d be plagiarizing).  The only words you really can use here would be “President” and “Prime Minister.”  These are the proper nouns. So put it into your own words.  How about: “Once the President had been informed, he contacted the Prime Minister.” And then cite the source of the information.  That would not be a quote problem or a suspicion of plagiarism

And never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever cut and paste anything from a source into your document unless you place it in quotes and cite the source of the quote.  (He said it again! And in italics! Must mean something!) (And it’s in bold, and italics, and red; maybe I should pay attention to this.)

Nitpicks and Style Issues (Or Helpful Hints)

1.      Margins and Font Papers should be doubled-spaced with one-inch margins, and reasonable sized font (11 point). Shorter pages with wide margins and large print size font will be penalized.

2.      Subject and Verb Make sure you have a subject and verb in every sentence. (You would be surprised how many important journals and books allow non-sentence sentences). This is non-fiction, not fiction. So, you need to observe the basic rules of grammar. A long sentence is not necessarily a better sentence -- each sentence should express only one thought. Don't be afraid to break up a long sentence into two or three shorter ones. It will usually flow better that way.

3.      Official Titles Provide someone’s title in the text the first time you mention them if they are an elected official (Tim Kaine, Governor of Virginia) or an appointed official (Assistant Secretary of Defense for International Security Affairs Paul Nitze).  Thereafter, you can refer to them as Kaine or Nitze. So, for the first mention, you’d say: “National Security Adviser Henry Kissinger told his assistant to.…”  From that point on, you can simply say “Kissinger told his assistant to…” When you mention a senator or representative, say: Senator John Warner (R-VA) to introduce and after than you can just say Warner or Senator Warner.

4.      Keep a Copy Make a copy of the paper for yourself before you hand it in to me. There are two reasons for this. If you have a copy, you don't have to worry about me losing a copy. I have never lost anyone's paper, but just in case you should always make sure that you have a copy of your paper with you, in any class, not just this one.

5.      Back up WHEN YOU TYPE YOUR PAPER ON A COMPUTER MAKE SURE YOU HAVE A BACKUP DISK WITH THE PAPER ON IT. AS YOU TYPE THE PAPER SAVE THE FILE TO THE BACKUP DISK EVERY TEN MINUTES OR SO. Don’t just leave it on your hard drive and hope it will be safe.  A super safe way to deal with this is to use your own, already built-in cloud system.  Email the drafts of your paper to yourself and then you know it will be safe on the VCU system and you can access it from anywhere on the planet. Also, remember that if you type on the university computers be careful. Putting your paper on the hard drive in the computer lab is risky – they sweep the hard drives of files at night. Keep a backup copy for yourself. I have several backup copies of anything I write. You don't ever want to lose work because you didn't back it up.

6.      No Wikipedia Do not use Wikipedia or any other web-based encyclopedia.  It is unreliable and you should have stopped using encyclopedias for research in elementary school.

7.      Reliability of the Internet Be careful about internet sources.  Make sure the source is reliable.  Remember that anyone can post anything on the internet.  There aren’t necessarily any editors or fact checkers.  For example, there is a website that links me to the Kennedy assassination; I was two years old. Ask me if you have questions about this (internet sources, not if I was involved in the Kennedy assassination; I wasn’t).

8.      The use of “I”: Try to avoid using “I” in non-fiction.  Instead of “I will discuss three problems…” say “This essay addresses three problems…”

9.      The use of a semicolon: Semicolons connect two complete sentences that are related to each other.  For example: “I went to the pizzeria to get a pie; it was closed so I had Chinese food instead.”  You could also write them as two separate sentences if you wanted.  The following would be an incorrect use of a semicolon: “I had six very tasty pizzas last week; except for that crappy one from the big chain store.”  That should be a comma, not a semicolon.  The test is this:  If the two sentences you are connecting with a semicolon could stand alone as complete sentences, then use a semicolon.  So, it becomes obvious: “Except for that crappy one from the big chain store” is not a sentence.

10.  The use of “however”: This trips everyone up.  It’s a bit similar to semicolons.  “I went to the pizzeria; however, when I got there, it was closed.”  Notice the semicolon, not the comma.  That’s because “When I got there, it was closed” could be a complete sentence by itself.  Also, this sentence is like the use of a semicolon.  You are connecting two complete sentences.  In this case, you’re connecting two sentences that are related, but related in a very specific way.  The second sentence is adding the “however” to show a different expectation than the first sentence implies.  The first sentence implies you were going to eat pizza.  The second sentence says you didn’t.   On the other hand, look at this example: “I went to the pizzeria.  Upon arriving, however, I found out it was closed.”  The “however” is surrounded by commas.  That’s because “upon arriving” is not a sentence by itself.  Here’s another aspect of this.  “I went to the pizzeria, the one with the best pizza in the world.”  There is a comma there because “the one with the best pizza in the world” is not a sentence by itself. These are the non-fiction rules. In fiction, you can do anything you want.

11.  Some useful rules:

1.      Numbers under 100 should be written as out.  So, you would not have this sentence.  “President Bush met with 3 advisers.”  It would be “President Bush met with three advisers.”

2.      When you have an acronym, such as NSDD-75 or UN.  First write out the name in full: National Security Decision Directive (NSDD) 75, or United Nations (UN). After that first use of the term, use the acronym.

Late Papers

Papers are due at the beginning of class on the date indicated in the syllabus. After about 10 minutes of class has passed, your paper is one day late.  I will mark late papers down ONE GRADE for each day late. That means that an almost perfect paper -- one that I would give 98 points to -- becomes an 88 if one day late, 78 if two days late, etc., all the way down to 8 points if nine days late, and zero points if ten days late. 

            Talk to me if you are having some medical, family personal problems. If there is a serious need to get an extension on the paper, I will give you an extension.  I do realize that there are more important things in life than this class and this assignment.  So, if you run into a problem, talk to me. Computer problems do not count as a problem that warrants an extension.  If you are writing your paper at the last minute and you have a problem, the moral of the story is that you should not have been writing your paper at the last minute.  If you have some kind of computer problem, and you are not writing your paper at the last minute, let me know.  Maybe I can help.

 



[1] Stuart Schram. “Economics in Command? Ideology and Policy since the Third Plenum, 1979-1984.” The China Quarterly 99 (September 1984): 417.



[1] Stuart Schram. “Economics in Command? Ideology and Policy since the Third Plenum, 1979-1984.” The China Quarterly 99 (September 1984): 417.